Reviews for FullMetal Alchemist: The Next Homunculus
shadow-binder chapter 10 . 1/8/2009
nice story... hope you can post another chapter sometime soon...
jesseternal chapter 10 . 12/20/2007
huh? i'm confused i thought their brother died? plz update soon i wanna kno how he's there. is he a humonculus or is he actually alive? plz update soon plz plz plz
A Handful of Words chapter 10 . 8/31/2007
Hey, i was wondering when you would update. Sorry about not posting my FMA fic...i wasn't interested enough in it to fully expand on it. So please accept my sincerest apologies.

Good chapter!

DemonRailysorry for not loged in chapter 10 . 8/31/2007
Its really good keep it going
Kyasarin-Maarukeehii1 chapter 9 . 11/28/2006
i made a comic for science class, and one of the people in it was hydro boy...good times, good times great chapter, i want to draw a picture of jayson's outfit. with a bit more of a detailed description, i could...well, update again soon!
Kyasarin-Maarukeehii1 chapter 8 . 11/28/2006
nice. i like the way that you explained they kids' powers. nifty-tastical!
Kyasarin-Maarukeehii1 chapter 7 . 11/28/2006
wow, i was wondering what those staffs did, and now i guess i know...those things sound cool! though i'm not sure that they are even remotely possible using alchemy, they still sounded sweet
Kyasarin-Maarukeehii1 chapter 6 . 11/28/2006
O.O i want that sounds is pretty...yayfulness good chapter!
Kyasarin-Maarukeehii1 chapter 5 . 11/28/2006
great beginning - but what was that guy at the end? who? i must know! the whole chapter rocked - i think i love this story... X3
Kyasarin-Maarukeehii1 chapter 4 . 11/28/2006
that was great! so now we sort of have a few more than 1 alchemist that can transmute without circles. this is going to be VERY interesting! i'm going to freeze!
Kyasarin-Maarukeehii1 chapter 3 . 11/28/2006
yay! it's hawkeye! that was a great chapter i'm glad that jacque is ok. if she wasn't, there would be some problems...
Kyasarin-Maarukeehii1 chapter 2 . 11/28/2006
that was great! *hits backspace button repeatedly and tries to keep typing* being in the snow makes typing hard *nods* what happened to jacque? and i'm so stealing the way you spelt jayson. that's so cool! i'm liking this story
JaluraXx chapter 4 . 11/27/2006
I saw one mistake in this chapter: Just because you've seen the gate doesn't mean you can transmute without a circle...they can create a transmutaion with their I haven't figured that out yet ; with the exception of that, this overall is a pretty good story
Taisi chapter 4 . 11/27/2006
“Sir,” Hawkeye said sternly, every word weighted, “I think that it’s about time that we go and see the Colonel, don’t you?” she gave him a steely look that quickly turned to one of confusion and concern. “Edward, what happened to your forehead? It’s so red…”

“Hahaha! Oh, nothing, nothing, just me being clumsy! Haha!” Ed laughed sheepishly. He quickly stopped, however, when he noticed that the Lieutenant wasn’t buying it. “It’d be in my best interest to go now, huh, Lieutenant?”

“Yes, sir, that’s correct…”

“Right… Well, then, I guess I’ll be seeing you guys later! Bye, Jayson! Bye, Jacque! See you later, Al - ”

“NOW, sir!” Hawkeye said fiercely as she pulled out a loaded gun and put it to the back of Edward’s head. Ed distinctly heard the safety click off…

“Ok, it’s been great you guys, see you later!” He shouted before running off in the other direction, Hawkeye in hot pursuit.

Jayson and Jacque laughed. Al just sighed.

:chuckling: Ahh, good times, good times...
DoomHydra chapter 8 . 11/15/2006
This fanfic is absolutely amazing! I love it! One of the best I've ever read! Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the amazing work! _
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