Reviews for Amended chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
good start to the story!

Your profile states you're from NY so I'm curious why you picked WVA as the setting...most people don't even seem to know its a state, people always ask me how close I live to Richmond (VA). Then I have to gve then a history lesson-I live in Charleston, WV.

Do know that does have its own monster story for that area-the Moth man! suppossedly the monster was seen in the 60's before the silver bridge collapse...because of desecration of ancient buriel grounds.

keep on writing ! :)
charmed1of2 chapter 1 . 7/9/2006
keep going its getting interesting