Nice ending, thank you. I really enjoyed reading this. I love happy endings

Sigh, I love the orange crush and think Harry and Ginny are lovely together. But it’s your story and it’s been a great read. The epilogue is yours to play with.

This was a unique and powerful and satisfying way to end Riddle. Well done!

What a fabulous reconciliation scene between Harry and Snape

That was a wonderful death for Argus and Deloris! Draco is 16, he would need serious consequences to change even slightly.

This is really such a pleasure to read.

This is quite a good story, it’s the first one of this genre that I’ve truly enjoyed. Thank you.

“…pulled out a stack of parchment, sneering at the poor quality of the paper…”
Parchment is not paper. Parchment is made from animal skin. Paper is a wood product.

Why would you call Severus a “potion’s master”?! You would never say “English’s professor” or “chemistry’s teacher”. Potions is plural, not possessive. Apostrophes do not make pluralizations. They are, however, necessary for the possessive case. Your story is well written so far, but correctly using the apostrophe can only improve your writing.

go suck on a lemon drop and DIE DUMBLEDORE

i would curse dumbledore for putting harry with them too SERIOUSLY THIS IS CHILD ABUSE WORTHY OF DECADES OF PRISON TIME

congrats snape! now you can taste ABUSE

dumbledore you condemned harry to this. snape sucks too ofc and azkaban is less than what he deserves

if dumbles didn't kill you for murdering so many innocents he'll pardon you now snape

I do not feel sorry for snape at all.

How else is he going to learn the truth about his bullying and lies that he has told himself for the last 15 years as he treates potter like crap?

quite frankly, I hope Vernon kills Snape/harry - which gets rid of snape and puts Vernon in prison!