Reviews for The beach and the adventure
kiddie18 chapter 7 . 7/26/2014
gud job! :D
Hi chapter 7 . 1/23/2013
anime lover chapter 3 . 1/2/2013
shes wearing what stars?
anime lover chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
how old are they and can she fill a swimsuit yet?
sweetest -fifteen chapter 3 . 3/31/2009
“And I’m not wearing strawberries now! I’m wearing sta-...Nothing! So er, let’s go! Hmph!”

Blue Moon and Roses chapter 7 . 9/27/2007

I really liked the last part!

I actually loved the whole fic though it was kinda short.
9'-'sachiko-chan'-'9 chapter 7 . 7/13/2007
nice story
girlonthemove210 chapter 7 . 5/27/2007
Hey can u please update this story coz I really like it!
SnowCharms chapter 7 . 3/14/2007
Seriously d end?
Summ3rHop3 chapter 7 . 3/12/2007
is that the end end or the end of the chapteR? just wondering...
Glittery.Night chapter 7 . 3/10/2007
cute.. but in my opinion it doesn't seem much of an ending...maybe you should... make another chapter :puppy-dog eyes: just kidding you don't have to make one if you don't want to!
Glittery.Night chapter 2 . 3/10/2007
aw.. Natsume wants to join but is hurt... I think Mikan should nave been wearing a bathing suit with polka think that would have been cute... great chapter and great job!
SnowCharms chapter 6 . 3/3/2007
LuckySock chapter 6 . 8/5/2006
I love it!
augustustheliar chapter 6 . 7/16/2006
Would Natsume really give Mikan a peck on the cheek? Who knows? What I know is, this story's cool.
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