|Reviews for A Pale Comparison|
| Nothing-Everything-Something chapter 2 . 1/19
No I want Sita dead I cried for Krishna that bitch doesn't deserve to live Elisa needs to go back and kill her
| Nothing-Everything-Something chapter 1 . 1/17
I'm with Elisa I feel sad for Krishna and I'm not gonna lie I was kinda rooting for him even tho I knew he wasn't gonna win
| EnvieShadowDragon2145 chapter 2 . 11/28/2014
Loved both of your stories I couldn't stop reading them!
| EnvieShadowDragon2145 chapter 1 . 11/28/2014
Loved your story!
| remus19 chapter 2 . 1/4/2013
that was a good story. but you should cut into more pages
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
Holy flamin sugar cubes! D8) 1322 north fourth ave. was my old address! ... you scare me with your address picking...
| VladLover chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
I love it!
Thank you for taking your time, in writing this very very long original story, it was awsome, you for sure have a future as a writer, but one thing i will liked to be here is some minor sexy scene between goliath and elisa at the end, or maybe some kissing at least?
congratulations, really :)
| Dragon34 chapter 2 . 7/3/2009
Ok I have to say Great Story! At first I was all like 'where's angela' and wondered about the timeline, but then she showed up. Where was she at the beginning of chapter one? Oh well, no matter. I read the whole thing in one sitting. I enjoy your writing style, even though a few times you're sentences are a bit redundant, and I was able to easily look past the minor inconsistencies.
Chapter two was especially gripping. I thought she was going to kill them and I found myself wondering, 'oh no! if she kills them she'll be out for good!' and then wondering if you were going to kill Elisa off instead. It would have been a tragic ending, but I like the happy ending better. Both of them. I hope you keep writing. Take care!
| Marz1 chapter 1 . 9/1/2004
Interesting story. so crosses don't work on these vampires hu? that sucks. Good characterization and plot. I don't really get how there could be vampires that puck didn't know about though, you'd think they'd be more noticable as they seem rather murder happy. oh well. good first chapter.
| morenwyn chapter 1 . 5/5/2004
th polt was amazing
| StaplersBreak chapter 1 . 11/24/2003
Someone has read Christopher Pike, ne?
Good story. Timeless classic I suppose.
| Bast's Shadow chapter 2 . 4/24/2001
I LOVE this fic! I mean I LOVE IT! This is one of the best stories I've EVER read. Please write more Goliath/Elisa fics! I can hardly wait!
| Sonar chapter 1 . 4/6/2001
sounds okay but no cigar
| Kame chapter 1 . 3/26/2001
Very good on both parts of the story. I'd give it for both parts 8.5/10. Please, write another chapter! There aren't enough Gargoyle fics out there! Writers, please write more.
| Anna chapter 1 . 3/22/2001
Did you change the story or something? Because last time I read it, Elisa drank some guys blood and Matt was seriously beat up by Krishna. There's so much Elisa/Goliath stuff everywhere (I'm not complaining about your story) The original was better in my opinion. And does Matt always have to be a beaten up puppy? Matt's my favorite character and he's always left out of fan fics for some reason. To SUM it all up: this story is a wonderful action fic, and keep writing- I enjoy reading.