Reviews for One Wish
BoomPowMina chapter 11 . 6/16/2013
OH now the girls know too
BoomPowMina chapter 9 . 6/15/2013
NOOO! I mean, yeah, i LOVE Sai, but come on... The guy is a replacement for everything, and now a father...poor guy...
BoomPowMina chapter 8 . 6/15/2013
I hope she is not pregnant...yet, i dont mind her getting pregnant with Sasuke there, but if he is not there, then NO! SHE CANT BE PREGNANT IF HE IS NOT THERE
BoomPowMina chapter 7 . 6/15/2013
I cried...like a baby...WAHHH SASUKE HOW DARE YOU LEAVE HER AGAIN?! PLEASE COME BACK SASUKE!
BoomPowMina chapter 6 . 6/15/2013
Oh shit, KAKASHI DONT YOU DARE!
SASUKE PLEASE DONT LEAVE! He cant leave now, right?
BoomPowMina chapter 5 . 6/15/2013
Lied...Sorry, my brain is currently loading...
BoomPowMina chapter 4 . 6/15/2013
BEHEHEHEHEHEHE WOOOOOO YAY :3
BoomPowMina chapter 3 . 6/15/2013
Lost it...hm... eheheheheh next chappie
BoomPowMina chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
HEHEHEHE IT SEEMS AWESOME!
Rayne Destiny chapter 21 . 5/13/2013
This was a great fic. It made me laugh and gave me warm and fuzzy feelings. I loved Sakura's vulgar mouth, especially when it came to Takara's birth. There were a few spelling errors, but those can be overlooked, and you've given me some ideas of my own. Thanks!
Guest chapter 13 . 2/16/2013
yay!
Guest chapter 12 . 2/16/2013
where's sasuke
xoigoi.labang chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
This story make me laugh a lot! Thank for the fun!
Sheshine chapter 4 . 2/1/2013
yep . . . just yep
GrammarNazi chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
Your - possessive - "Your grammar needs to be beta'd"
You're - contraction of 'you' and 'are' - "You're a decent writer despite the grammar."

There - place - "It's over there."
They're - contraction of 'they' and 'are' - "They're the cutest couple."
Their - possessive - I like their sexual tension.

You keep using 'their' for all forms of 'there' and 'your' for 'you're'
You need to be careful with that
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