Reviews for One Wish
xoigoi.labang chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
This story make me laugh a lot! Thank for the fun!
Sheshine chapter 4 . 2/1/2013
yep . . . just yep
GrammarNazi chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
Your - possessive - "Your grammar needs to be beta'd"
You're - contraction of 'you' and 'are' - "You're a decent writer despite the grammar."

There - place - "It's over there."
They're - contraction of 'they' and 'are' - "They're the cutest couple."
Their - possessive - I like their sexual tension.

You keep using 'their' for all forms of 'there' and 'your' for 'you're'
You need to be careful with that
Iname Kohaki chapter 21 . 12/27/2012
WHAT THE CRAP! That cant be the end! what about Sasuke-kun's goal and the battle. not to mention Itachi(so hot!). Cece wanna see happy ending!
Iname Kohaki chapter 17 . 12/27/2012
Sakura's birthday is March 28th
Iname Kohaki chapter 13 . 12/27/2012
YAY! SasuKe-kun's back!
Iname Kohaki chapter 10 . 12/27/2012
when will Sasuke-kun find out!
Iname Kohaki chapter 3 . 12/27/2012
Oh My God Saku-chan is awsome! I love it when she teases Sasu-kun! Ahahahaha
Looms chapter 10 . 12/13/2012
I love this I'm on chap lO and I really wish sakura told tsunade that it was sasukes baby
cutiepiegirlie chapter 21 . 12/8/2012
sigh, why is there not a sequel. lol. GREAT STORY!
JustAnotherReader2 chapter 21 . 11/10/2012
i definitly loved your writing style, the pace was constant. Loved the plot and how you potrayed your characters :). THank you for writing this story :P.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
Twilight... _
acetwolf94 chapter 21 . 8/10/2012
I love it! Please add a sequel soon. Its really good.
WantFanFics chapter 2 . 8/7/2012
Chapter 2 is part of chapter 1 so you have this stuff twice :/ thought I'd let you know
Sasuchan chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
Dafuq! Why the hell is sakura the weakling bitch acting a tough! Shit man i actually realised how much of a sakura fan you are LOOL .. Sorry to say but shes weak, stupid selfish and ugly so stop portraying her as an IT girl, shes props the most hated character on NARUTO .. Actually no she is the most hated .. As for your story.. Where the hell are you heading with it? Your grammar is off and you have spelling mistakes .. Also, if your gonna make them OOC. Then fuckin mention it you moron! I am done reading this peice of crap! There way better fics on FF
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