|Reviews for Beneath the Surface|
| ShadowWolf626 chapter 12 . 8/10/2016
I have truly enjoyed this story so far and do hope you continue it. Are you going to turn Yugi back? It would be cool if you also turn Yami. but whatever as long as they are togther idc. anyways love it so far tis well done.
| yami-marron chapter 12 . 8/11/2015
Wow, I was staying away from mermen fics for a while, thinking nothing can interest me, and here you are, proving me wrong! I am very impressed with you choosing sign language as means of communication, I usually encounter the magic rule 'everyone speaks English'. I am also very fond of phonetics, especially sounds missing in mermen language.
Your characters are very likeable and do not seem to be in dicrepancy with their originals, so your fic holds everything I could want from mermaid!au. Thank you for your lovely work and I cannot wait for the next chapter! :-)
| naomi chapter 12 . 9/19/2011
I like this story
| Mimi chapter 12 . 9/8/2011
Dude, I love this! But you haven't updated in fuckin THREE YEARS! You kidding me?
Anyway, I love the way the Yami has to carry Yugi around everywhere, it's adorable! And I like both of their personalities, they're rather distinct with out being cliche - that's good.
This is very well written and a facsinating read, and if you ever feel obliged to put us all out of our misery and update again, you can rest assured I shall not forget this story!
| AngelofaWhiteNight chapter 12 . 6/15/2011
This story is so amazing- I love it! Update soon?
| DarkValkyriaJ chapter 2 . 10/9/2010
I LOVE THIS FIC! I HAVE READ IT 3 TIMES! IT'S IS AWESOME!
| bansheegrrl chapter 12 . 8/13/2010
A really adorable story! i love this, its so unique :D I hope you find the inspiration to finish it!
| Wernie chapter 12 . 8/11/2010
Eh! Brain and coherence have both been shot to hell (guh, homework), but I wanted to tell you that this is a great, well-developed and thought-through fic! :D Yay! Sign-language! Yay! For food research! And yay! For wonderful inner-conflict and turmoil!
Thank you for writing and sharing. (:
| LovinTheTan chapter 12 . 5/12/2010
Please update this. I'd like to know what happens to the other mermen!
I'll give you a cupcake?
| NHST chapter 12 . 4/8/2010
when are the lemons coming? It's a really great story but, i'm kinda in the mood for some dirty action! :D
| Akumu Nokami chapter 12 . 9/26/2009
Hm, did you realize in your last chapter that 60,0 Yen is nearly 600 USD? Just making sure you understood just how much Yami was spending on gas and snacks at that convenient store, as well as how much Anzu gave him.
| kuroneko1571 chapter 12 . 9/25/2009
Love this fic! Very entertaining. Story is well written and plot flows smoothly. Hope to see another update soon.
| tinkletimekelly chapter 12 . 9/25/2009
I'm just glad you're continuing with this. So any direction you choose to go with this, is fine by me. Though I must mention, I love you're use of the "fandom" characters.
| YugiTheKing chapter 12 . 9/24/2009
Update soon please. Not much I'm going to spazz over in happines right now, but then again, this is obviously filler. And besides, I don't really have any complaints. D
| YugiTheKing chapter 11 . 9/22/2009
Aw. The last paragraph was a bit wordy, but it doesn't matter. Please update soon!