Reviews for The Loss of Innocence
JeanneZ84 chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
Mark has problem about dealing with the fact that he killed someone even though it was someone like Weed Randal.

I think his gonna have a hard time dealing with going on and knowing how he will handle it and carry on.

Very emotional good as well.

JeanneZ84
L.M.Lewis chapter 1 . 8/2/2006
I really like that note of uncertainty at the end. Very much in keeping with the epilogue of the episode itself (which was one of the best moments of the whole series).

You've also got the nasty side of Sandy just right. There's a reason why the two characters don't get along and it's not because Sandy is effortlessly perfect.

This is a quiet, tense, wonderfully pensive piece.
owlcroft chapter 1 . 7/7/2006
It's a pretty good bet that anyone who's written fanfic would love to take shot at this "missing scene", but there's no way I'm going to do it any better than this. And the ending is just perfect. No other way to describe it - _perfect_!