|Reviews for Captured|
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/29/2013
| danneybee chapter 14 . 4/8/2011
Yes. There should be a sequel.
| Shadows-Rose99 chapter 14 . 2/7/2011
Wow! This is the best OTH story I've read so far! And it's got loads of Hammy and RJ in it! My two fav characters! Yay! x3 3
Still, I love how you played it out, the detail and the characters. Also the theme of animal abuse crisis was fantastic! Great job.
| Qille chapter 11 . 1/23/2011
ALL HAIL THE POWER OF THE COOKIE!
| Talk Bubble chapter 13 . 12/6/2010
That was the most DRAMATIC, SUSPENSEFUL and ACTION-Y thing I have EVER seen an animal do! You got the general FEEL of the movie in your writing too, which is great!
MAN that Dr Vexon is just so STUBBORN! It's like, DIE already!
This was so amazing and fun to read. I can only imagine the reactions of the scientists to see the animals flying a helicopter.
| Rachel Erica chapter 14 . 8/1/2010
Great story! It got me emotional on a few parts, but I really enjoyed it. :)
| Rachel Erica chapter 4 . 7/28/2010
So far this story awesome, but there's something I gotta point out, even though it's really too late to change it: Tiger has a British dialect, and you gave him a German dialect. It's no big deal. I just thought I'd point it out.
| Negima-Roxas chapter 14 . 9/20/2009
GO FOR A F-KING SEQUEL!
Gotta love this one..
| Jess chapter 14 . 7/12/2008
Brit Brit suggested I read this. It is a well written story that I enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing it.
| ChaosBoundJenna chapter 10 . 5/28/2008
ok, uh, you said "“What’s that for?” Marissa yelled over the incredible noise filling the lab as RJ rounded the corner, skittering on the floor again in the process." Shouldn't it be Rob, not RJ?
| ChaosBoundJenna chapter 14 . 5/3/2008
LOVE IT! I really like the friendship between Hammy and RJ. I almost cried when the part where Hammy was momentarily dead came. I had to fight tears! I REALLY like this story! Faves!
| Victim-of-His-Own-Design chapter 14 . 7/31/2007
Aw-w-w-w-w. Neat ending. This seemed to have a more serious tone than the movie, and it doesn't have as many snappy one-liners, but it works very well for the direction you were going in. It’s a story that still smoothly follows the Dreamworks piece, and I certainly appreciate the maturing experience for the characters. I’ll be moving on to read the sequel very soon.
| Victim-of-His-Own-Design chapter 13 . 7/31/2007
This chapter was crazy, over-the-top cartoony, and largely degrading to Humans.
Compliment intended, of course. I, for one, had a lot of fun!
| Victim-of-His-Own-Design chapter 10 . 7/27/2007
Excellent chapter, and an excellent story so far. Well-thought-out action sequences with thrilling details, the original characters' mannerisms and dialog are spot on, and your own characters are smart and interesting. But the graphic descriptions of painful restraint, animal cruelty, and torture just ... satisfy me.
But seriously, I was a little thrown off by the occasional use of profanity. Light though it may be, it seems somewhat out of place here. It's not a big problem, and some of the dialog certainly needs powerful words, but if it could gradually be phased out and replaced with deeply emotional phrases that are clean, that would be best in my opinion.
| Raven Darkstar chapter 1 . 3/6/2007
Great story! Kept me at the edge of my seat!