Reviews for Tatooinian Sunset
Jedi Jesi Jiin chapter 25 . 8/7/2017
This was an excellent work if fan fiction. I loved Luke's journey, his many names and how he was innocent but not completely ignorant and helpless.

Good work, good overall writing and grammar etc... I am now off to find d the sequel...

*Applause to author*
Jedi Jesi Jiin chapter 19 . 8/7/2017
"For a few moments, he stared down at the mess that Han called a hyperdrive. Then he backed away. There were some things that not even a miracle worker could fix." Best lines ever!
Guest chapter 25 . 11/18/2016
DarkPriestessOfHyrule chapter 25 . 4/7/2016
Wow, what a unique idea for a story. This was great, thanks for writing it. I loved your version of Luke and exploring more of the Tuskan culture (not to mention that ending). I will definitely be rereading this at another time.
Darksnider05 chapter 15 . 2/28/2016
It takes like fifteen years of training to become a Jedi Knight after being taken as a Padawan why would Obi-Wan think Leia was in anyway close to becoming one.
Darksnider05 chapter 13 . 2/28/2016
Why would a member of the rebellion approach a stranger and offer them a place in the Rebellion. Unless there's some back story were missing here and they've got people watching Luke.
Darksnider05 chapter 12 . 2/28/2016
Ugh Krayt pearls can be used to make Lightsabers. A son honoring his mother by using hers would of made sense.
Darksnider05 chapter 11 . 2/28/2016
Where did the idea that Leia had less combat potential than Luke come from or ability with the force. The opposite should be true in this story with being trained from childhood. Honestly where does this sexist view come from. Their twins equal in the force.
Darksnider05 chapter 9 . 2/28/2016
The Executor isn't completed for like several months or a year after the Death Star is destroyed the first time I think.
Darksnider05 chapter 1 . 2/27/2016
Yeah Jedi would hunt down and retrieve that child their not above sneaking and the idea that sneaking has anything to do with the Dark side is crazy. Even more so if it prevents violence. Hell the start of ANH Obi-Wan does exactly this to the Death Star to disable the tractor beam.
The Little Chibi chapter 25 . 12/22/2015
Eyy, this is really good. You wrote Luke and Leia fantastically, and I love how you included so much on the Tusken's culture. You occasionally crammed a large amount of ellipses into a single paragraph/sentence, which is a bit of a pet peeve of mine, but it didn't happen so often that I wanted to stop reading, so eh.
Serenity Winchester chapter 25 . 11/7/2015
I just finished all 24 chapters plus the epilogue. I love story's where Luke Skywalker gets raised differently.

Sadly there far and few in between. All the chapters were well written, and you did a wonderful job writing for all the Star Wars characters. This takes me back. It was as fun as watching all three films, episodes 4, 5, and 6. Fantastic work! Later!
Brievel chapter 25 . 4/24/2015
...oh dear.
Brievel chapter 15 . 4/23/2015
...oh dear. I begin to see where all this is going.
Brievel chapter 9 . 4/23/2015

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