Reviews for Ritual
Darakna chapter 5 . 3/28
this is awesome. slow development. not ooc. why did you stop?
karexie chapter 5 . 2/24/2010
This story is so cute, shame it hasnt been updated in a long while. Fingers and toes crossed that will change in the near future
hellzboy chapter 5 . 9/2/2008
It wasn't bad, I liked this chapter~ and it's kinda funny seeing Kai squishing strawberries hehehe Please Update this~! XD
RabidBunnyQueen chapter 5 . 10/21/2007
The chapter is wonderful so stop being so hard on yourself. I can't wait for your next one and i'm so keeping up with your story every week!
Ming-sama chapter 5 . 10/9/2007
This is like so sweet *giggles*

luv it x3

Reis sweet... btu should eat more

and Kai *drools* he's acting so cute XD

Ming~
Asher Elric chapter 5 . 7/19/2007
Ah. that was just too cute.
Black Magician Girl3 chapter 5 . 6/21/2007
I don't see why you hated that last chapter lol. It was cute. Anyways Update soon please. I like this story.
The Laughing Mann chapter 5 . 6/20/2007
I'm not for my brutal honesty, I can say that I've read far worse. I've read some that made my eyes bleed, this wasn't bad at all. I mean yeah, it made me laugh cuz it was a little whimsical, but it wasn't worthy a ticket to hell.

So keep writing and hurry up and update!
Rio 2.0 chapter 5 . 6/3/2007
Yeah...

NOT a bad chapter.

NONE of them were bad.

... Considering the stuff you find on this site, I bow to you.

I laughed, and I giggled and I cooed...

So please, update soon with another NOT BAD chapter.

...and thanks for the recipe! I'll never use it, because my attempts at cooking are akin to to something... disasterous. I honestly can't think of a good analogy right now.

Anyways, looking forward to more.

... I love Great Danes.

Much Love,

Rio Hime
Catgurl2004 chapter 5 . 5/10/2007
Aww, don't hate the chapter! I LOVE THE ENTIRE FIC! It's been a while, eh? I need to catch up on my lack of writing Beyblade fics; I just drabbled something about Rei and Kai that's terrible and short, but ah well. Anyways, this fic is awesome, truly it is! You use such nice words and phrases, and your chapters really flow together. The very last senetence of this chapter made me smile and feel like I was going to burst with fluff.

I still seriously enjoy Beyblade fanfiction, and I think I'm getting into it again...It makes me happy, too. Your fics are really helping me come along, and I can't WAIT to see the next chapter! -sits patiently at your feet-

~Cats rule
AC7DC chapter 5 . 5/8/2007
OK chap. Poor Rei, bitten by a dog...

I really love that when Rei has some troubles and Kai is thre to solve them! It was a fantastic idea that Rei didn't eat properly and Kai got wrried about him. I think you could use that same not eating idea again...

More chappies please, and fast!
Nemo Sushi chapter 5 . 5/2/2007
OMG! KAI SMILED! IT'S THE END OF THE WORLD! *screams*
Kayzo chapter 5 . 4/30/2007
this is so kawaii! every chapter is like a kawaii little story in itself! i love it! can't wait to read what comes up next!

~tccho!
Chibi Kitty chapter 5 . 4/22/2007
I don't think the chapter is that bad. There's a lot of simmplistic originality in your story that, in my opinion, makes it seem very sincer. I hope you don't decide to drop the story because it's very hard to find well writen fanfics and it's always a tragidy when a good author stops.

by the way, could you send me the recipie for the drop biscits?
Dreams-of-Mine chapter 5 . 4/14/2007
YAY! you updated! I love this chapter ((and yes, I read your foot note)). . I love it! please update soon!
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