Reviews for The Broken's Lament
Thorn on a Rose chapter 1 . 7/7/2006
It almost seems that this is the poem of a lot of people/figures in the world. People who we know of but have never met and soon even our memory of them fades and they exist no more...

Sad but as always beautifully written!

Great Job!

Till Next Time,


PS-sorry I haven't been reviewing as much! I've been moving family and myself*-* Don't worry! I'll catch up on the reviews...soon.
aserene chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
wow. i really really like the last stanze...don't ask why, it just sounds nice together. and it flows very nicely.
Richforce chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
nice job