Reviews for Scream in the Night
SecretCodeLyokan chapter 5 . 6/20/2015
Now, THAT'S a surprise!
Samantha Knight chapter 5 . 10/27/2014
XDDDD and I suppose that I give birth first, huh? Hahaha
Insanityismygameguessmyname chapter 5 . 6/17/2011
Okay wow, your story is so real, which sounds crazy.

But I absolutely am amazed by this and Overwhelmed, sorry for and spelling mistakes(I always failed spelling tests anyway) and wow what a cliff hanger. And just a bit of advice for writer's block (warning may sound stupid) ask the characters where they want to go, and if that doesn't work then go do something completely unrelated! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Eaglator23 chapter 5 . 5/11/2011
Oh snap...
Sasuketaemin chapter 5 . 1/20/2011
please update soon i know i am goig to love this story
BoyWhoDisappeared chapter 5 . 1/8/2011
This story is great so far.

'Overwhelmed' was a great story and I can tell that your writing style has improved greatly since you wrote that, so it's kind of obvious that this story is going to turn out awesome, lol

Also, when picking out the name for Yumi's and Ulrich's child, do you mind if I suggest using a Japanese name? I only ask because pretty much evey fanfic I've read that involves their child, they usually name them something of European origin, and I figure since they already have a European last name, they might as well have a Japanese first name, but it's only my opinion. I'll love the story either way.

Anyway, please hurry and update! XD
Nona-96 chapter 5 . 12/23/2010
cool
Nicole13-1991 chapter 5 . 11/4/2010
well then...
Aquapphire chapter 4 . 5/1/2009
lolz XD this is great x)
TheWritingTeaMan chapter 4 . 1/5/2009
Hey there! Ok, so I'm a long-time reader, first time reviewer (for you, at least :P). But yeah, so I've been reading your stuff (particularly this and Overwhelmed (which, by the way, I fell in love with, printed out, and still have it sitting on my desk in my room :P)), and I really, really, and I mean really love it. In all honesty at the beginning of Overwhelmed you still seemed to be getting your CLFF legs running, but once you got up to speed there was no stopping you :P

So yeah, here I am, writing a review, because I miss your stuff (first time I've signed onto the site in a little while)! The story seems so interesting, and after Overwhelmed I truly can't wait to see what happens next! Now, I don't want this to feel like pressure or anything, because believe me, I totally understand writers' block and how freaking annoying it truly is. I'm doing this for encouragement only, cuz maybe that will help this story get back up and running :D

I really honestly don't have anything bad to say about what you're written off the top of my head, which is good! I like when that happens! So yeah, just keep on workin', keep on doin' good, and I hope to see some more from you soon!

- T.
RenaYumi chapter 4 . 7/19/2008
I... should kiss your face. I love you, darling lovely. This is amazing and your opening scene brought me to near tears of joy. wonderful wonderful wonderful. You put me to shame a hundred times over with your amazing talent. great job. lovelovelove

Rena
PeaceToThePeople chapter 4 . 7/15/2008
YOUR BACK! :D

loved the chapter!

their all pregnant! too cute!

haha. i love odd!

super cute chapter!

i cant wait for the rest! :]
NewMrs.Edward Cullen chapter 3 . 1/21/2008
ow plz go on and plz hurry cause i really like this story
Dani Ann Stern chapter 3 . 11/28/2007
if you make the baby a girl name it after me please my name is Dani Ann Stern
amazingbaby chapter 3 . 7/29/2007
U better update cuz I want 2 noe wat ulrich said. LOLZ
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