What a wonderful storey. Tense, action, and lots of the Atlantians at their best. Well done.

I'm on the train attempting to maintain composure and having a really difficult time. If the rest of this storey is anything like chapter 1, I'm in for a treat.

Awesome! Brilliant! I really love emotional angst the best...especially when it pertains to Rodney! Awesome story! I love the group dynamics!

OMG! Poor McKay! That was brilliant writing, very intense!

Interesting story! I figured out that they were Genii before you told us.

Great story, loved it. Your description of McKay's fear and desperation were very evocative and despite claustrophobia being one of the few phobias I *don't* have, I could really feel his panic. I love that all your stories are so well written, descriptive and unhurried.

Wow, that was intense. Outstanding fic. Last one I get to read until I watch the end of season 2 and the beginning of season 3 though :( This fic was so good I feel like I should say something else, but I can't think of anything :P I did love McKay's interactions with Ren, and McKay bullying Beckett out of his funk.

Bravo! Bravo!

That was FANTABOULOUS! You did really well on the characterization of everyone and oh the angst of it all!

It played out just like an episode and that, to me, is the mark of excellent fanfiction.

Again, bravo on a job very well done!

Keep writing like that and I'll definitely keep coming back for more!

Maja

*runs off to find out what else the loverly Tipper wote*

I was wondering when we were going to get back to Rodney . . . Yay Rodney angst!

MOREMOREMORE!

Maja

Just wanted to say quickly that I really love the way you wrote Rodney in this chapter! Very in character and Rodney-ish!

Now on to the rest of the story! (Which I totally anticipate loving! Yayz!)

Maja

Again, a wonderful story. Don't have time for a longer review at the moment as I have to go (just HAD to finish reading your story). So just know that I loved it!

I loved it!

Just read it all the way through.

Great fic.

:D

A fantastic tale! Nail-biting suspense and an extremely satisfying uncoiling of all that ratcheted excitement. Thanks for the wonderful read.

I like this story a lot and have reread it several times since first reading. Think the villains are very original.

However, I think the part with Sheppard saying "he's only 12 years old," as a reason Ren would not hurt anyone is out of character. Any soldier that served in the Middle East knows the next suicide bomber could be a kid, or the sniper on the roof could be a kid. Someone else should have made that comment-would have made it more believable.

OH what an amazing story! had me at the edge of my seat , couldn't get up until I finish it, I went thru all kind of emotions, first angry at that Horrible monster of a "girl" and what they did to Poor Carson...it was really! like kicking a puppy...Carson! the man is the sweetest person in the whole pegasus galaxy! (*sobbing thinking of Sunday** I'll never forgive them for doing that*) I fell Sad thinking of Poor Mckay! and dispair when Sheppard was Yelling at Rodney trying to reach him in his catatonic state...and then How can you EVER forgive the damage those boys did, and the Geni! they deserve a nuke been deliver thru the gate...bastards! and then the whole dealing with the aftermath and poor Carson comming to grasp with what happen...and Rodney helping him in his own unique way...BRAVO !

*standing ovation* Bravo, everyone who loves SGA should read this gripping story. Bravo!

Must read more of your work.