I am sorry, Enchantedwriter 72; I did not smile as I read your story. It was just too short and simple.

This was not a funny story. It was epic and sad somehow but I still liked it.

OH NOES! NOT...*the button*...

Heh. Lemmings. I'd forgotten about that game. My dad bought it for me for my birthdy once. Majorly weird game.

Anyway... great one-shot! I'm proud of that little rebel lemming. _ I was fully expecting his grand plan to backfire on him, with him either falling down a hole and going "Blech!" or being blown up. XD But you kept him alive.

Oh, God... Now that I've remembered the 'splat' noise, I can't stop hearing it... "Blech!"

This fic made me smile anyway. _ Brings back memories of that weird game.

ravengal out x

Oh my god this is amazing, to be honest I just typed "lemmings fan fiction" into google to see what would happen, but I'm glad I did. Bravo!

I really enjoyed this short story! I always just felt sorry for all the little lemmings that don't make it to the "paradise". It also reminds me of all the gooballs in World of Goo (WiiWare Game) that get left behind. A very moving story. Thankyou!

That was a short but cute and thrilling story. I never once really thought much of Lemmings before this story. I never really stopped to think about how they must feel sacrificing themselves like that.

It made me think, good job. :)

Aww, so cute. I just love Lemmings. Great story!

Sure, I'll review! I thought that some of it was funny :D :D :D

I've never played the game 'lemmings' before but I've most certainly heard of it before!

E! *random fangirl squeal*

I loved this story! i always thought that the Lemmings got the worst end of the deal, just being mindless slaves :]

HAHA! That's right, F* YOU, evil mind controlling CURSOR! D

*cough*

Yes, I am up way too late. *triple thumbs up!* :D

*toddles back to bed*

I just had to read it again. This thing is awsome! i really can't say how cool it is. Very inspiring.

This isn't "completely insane", it's pretty well thought. I enjoyed reading it, well done.

Wow! You say it's insane but, I don't think so. I really liked it! Please write many more!

The old 'if what is not sentient was sentient' motif I see.

All the same interesting little bizzare tale.

I doubt you can actually do that in the game, but of course that's not the point.

The ultimate irony is that you, the cursor, are supposed to be leading the Lemming to paradice.

wowo... i gained happiness from that story. You almost begin chanting them on when the numbers count down.