|Reviews for Blue Mask, 2 Swords, and Sozin's Comet|
| misuky7 chapter 38 . 7/24
This story was marvelous, simply marvelous. I loved the use of Chinese in this, some of the words I even recognized. Sad Zuko died though. :3
| Guest chapter 18 . 3/14
Dude I think you're spelling toph's name wrong...
| 2human chapter 14 . 3/10
I don't know if I'm a fan of characters talking for paragraph lengths at a time. It's not very realistic. Also sometimes it's hard to know who is speaking. It gets a little confusing. A little "katara said..." Before or after dialogue Would clear things right up :)
| 2human chapter 8 . 3/10
This story is dark...
I like it. ;) super excited to see what happens next.
| Davey Strudel chapter 38 . 11/23/2015
I am just. In tears. I honestly have no words for how good this is. Zuko literally broke my heart in the final chapters. Thank you so much for writing this, it was an emotional ride a a beautiful one from start to finish.
| kmh1 chapter 38 . 9/17/2015
Your story was well thought out and I was impressed by the characterizations of the "Gaang"
Some of the content was pretty disturbing, and for some reason I didn't realize it was rated M until I had been caught up in the plot. Obviously, I continued on and I was able to skim through most of what I wasn't keen on reading and I didn't feel like I missed the intent behind the story.
Of note, you tended to use the word craved vs carved and lesions vs lessons. Otherwise, you had a well written story.
Thanks for sharing.
| MrTheCheesecaker chapter 38 . 8/5/2014
An interesting change in tone from the ATLA stories I usually read. Very VERY dark. On the one hand I love what you've done with Zuko's character using what was already in the show, it fit very well.
On the other hand, I am concerned for your mental health, what with the darkness and desperation being so believable that I can only assume you write from experience (Having read your 'Sources of Inspiration' I now realise this is true).
The story does have its negative points, the most glaring being your atrocious spelling (sorry), which looks to be a combination of typing dyslexia (I get this too) and your word processor's dictionary messing up.
The other being that I feel Katara's bereavement at the end could have been dealt with in more detail, since she has to live without her 'red string' partner.
On that note I would also commend you on the research put into this story. It make the story that much more real.
| What chapter 1 . 7/12/2014
I don't understand anything that is happening. Maybe it'll be easier to get later. It sounds like it would be great though.
| Guest chapter 12 . 10/27/2013
thanks for this amazing story
| Primus2021 chapter 10 . 10/2/2013
They are still 12 aren't they? Or did I miss a chapter telling me that they were all a few years older then cannon?!
| Uhh chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
I...am..extreeemely confused. Oh well, it'll make sense soon
| Selias chapter 4 . 8/6/2013
Why are you bothering with chinese or whatever, if you have to keep putting translations behind it?
| MaiaAlcippe chapter 38 . 6/13/2013
That was so good! The plot was splendid and you did a wonderful job with all of the different perspectives and narrations! Absolutely fantastic! Keep up the great work!
| Wonderoasis chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
Amazing! Now I'm going to read this chapter again, slowly, without getting caught up in the moment.
| cearo chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
I really enjoyed this story. Made me uber sad though, as in cannot continue reading type of emotional overload. This story is definitely memorable and original. I loved some of the concepts you introduced!
However, there were a lot of spelling mistakes and typos. A good re-read would go a long way to correcting these.
Awesome work, it's already in my favourites :P