Reviews for Warmth
Camille.Ad0 chapter 9 . 6/30/2015
i like it
Lady of the Hunt chapter 9 . 6/6/2011
Awesome. :)
Shella chapter 7 . 10/22/2009
*snicker* Again you bring Fuu to glowingly IC life, with a punchline of win.
Shella chapter 6 . 10/22/2009

...Hm, I seem to have been flattened by a high-speed truckload of symbolism.

However, this is one of those occasions where brick-level subtlety ... actually works okay, or even really, compellingly well. I really like this concept and how you've drawn it out.

Maybe Jin won't look so much like a zombie now.
Shella chapter 4 . 10/22/2009
Lovely and poetic. ... *sniff*
Shella chapter 3 . 10/22/2009
Mugen's an idiot; Jin smacks some sense into him; Fuu's adorable and adoring. All is as it should be. *cuddles this fic*
RaidenLovesShoujo chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
Aw... that was niice!

you're comparisons' were awesome :)

Jin the moon and Mugen the sun


too cool

Blonde-Existentialist chapter 9 . 9/3/2008
Very sweet, tender drabble set. Great use of colors and imagery.
NakeBenihime chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
Love this chapter! Very descriptive and I like the anologies between Mugen and Jin concerning the sun and the moon, one being hot and the other being cold. Great observations of the two, and I agree! Fuu would be the earth, warm, caught in the middle. Great intro...I need to read the rest.
wickedsugarrush chapter 9 . 3/19/2008
These are in fact amazing. I love them. The theme is really well played out and you are excellent at the prose aspects.
BlackRoseSophie chapter 9 . 1/27/2008
I love it! You are amazing at writing! _
Gingerbread Owl chapter 9 . 1/22/2008
Wow. Just... wow. You're writing style is amazing and the 'contrast' theme never goes stale; you re-invent it well in each chapter.
Kismet's Kiss chapter 9 . 1/22/2008
aw...I like how at end of it all, with the reliving of their dreams, you have them actually become the oppsities of their normal selves, Fuu is loud, and not she is quite, Mugen doesn't blush and Jin doesn't smile.


are you finding it hard to update as well and seeing the replays of SC on AS serves as a sort of taunting to finally update again? I haven't updated my SC story in possibly half a year, and I feel horrible, but there's just...nothing there, nothing turn for that story to continue. XD
Guest chapter 9 . 1/20/2008
This is such an amazing piece, I'm in love.

Too lazy to sign in... but I couldn't let this go unreviewed. I've kept up with it, and will continue to as long as you are updating. Brilliant, amazing, beautiful writing.
EWEWEWEWEW chapter 1 . 1/19/2008
This is great stuff! _

Yes Fuu is warm...D
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