That was really good! It's always interesting to get a third party's view on our favorite couple.

Wah! I love the way you write Rogan! From this random guy's perspective, you captured them beautifully. Great job!

Smart art student, that. Writing's perfect, and just this little part of their relationship is so well told. Very impressive.

I always wonder what would happen if Logan and Marie ran in to an old friend of Marie's at a bar or something. It might start something like this . . . maybe. I would like to see what Logan would do if Marie got a bit flirty with said old (guy) friend-maybe Marie has a past that Logan doesn't even know about-maybe she was in the ballet and had a dance partner she was close too, or in a band or something. Hmmmmm. Now I have a plot bunny rolling and I have so little time or energy to write anything. I kinda wish someone would take it on . . .

very pretty little story! love it!

Aw! that's such a ... not fluffy, but ... fuzzy story! :D i liked it... LOTS. you should write another where he actually meets someone... i'm curious to see what would happen if he ended up at the mansion or something :D

It's a shame that it didn't occur to him to start drawing them both, but getting stared down by ol' Wolvie can make you forget everything but the hot feeling in your groin from where he made you pee your pants. That having been said, you rock.

wow that was beautiful...I just really liked it...good job :D

that was good

i love how you wrote that! probably one of the most compleat one-shots i've read in a long time. For once i'm not wishing there was more...i feel whole with this story...GO YOU!. The fact that you had an outsider comment and observe Rogue was wonderful and Logan showing up didn't hurt either :)

Keep up the good work and i hope to read more stories from you soon!

~~Viper~~

i like it, for some reason i picture piotr as the observer, dunno. i love it anyways. its very classy, yet not overwhelming. i love the descriptions.

oh, i like this. very interestin'. i was imagining da artist was angel...he seems like da type of guy. but i really like this. where'd da name come 4rm?

Nicely written. I appreciated the new perspective and the description of Logan's body language.

This is really different and I applaud you for writting something so wonderful and refreshing.

Nice oneshot.

cool story keep it up i cant say any more than that cause i dont no anyumore yet.

LUV DarkAngel

aww i feel real bad for the art makes me want to reach out and give him a hug. This is a good oneshot maybe you can add more to it but then it wouldn't be a oneshot oh well it was good.I want to give him another hug that made my heart break. but hey i love the way you portead logan as an overprotected big brother