Reviews for Everytime We Touch
Sweeter chapter 2 . 2/9/2009
Okay. Time for some uncalled and slightly annoying betaing.

She was ungreatful. Spoiled prat. He'd show her one night. He'd get this chip out of his head even if he had to drill it out and scoop it out with a spork.

There's the ungrEAtful part, spoiled PRAT part, and drill OUT and scoop it OUT with a SPORK. Yes, I'm annoying.

Ungrateful. In Canada anyway. And I don't know if you want prat or brat but prat is used usually for guys (bint or chit for girls). And you used out twice plus spork. But that sentance was funny btw. So Spike. This is an interesting story so I'm gonna read further. You might want to get a beta because I don't want to leave anymore know-it-all comments. Btw, you better than this lol.
darklover chapter 9 . 11/12/2007
Great story. I'd love to read more.
Angie chapter 9 . 8/15/2006
I can't wait to see what happens next! Spike and Buffy parents!
erinjoy29 chapter 9 . 8/14/2006
I love your story!

Please update again really soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!
always-drifting-and-dreaming chapter 9 . 7/9/2006
Nice chapter. Funny actually. I like when Buffy and Spike say::

'

"I'll board up your windows." Buffy promised.

"I'll board up y'door." Spike added.'
DaPhoenix chapter 8 . 7/9/2006
Great story. Post more.
always-drifting-and-dreaming chapter 8 . 7/7/2006
I totally love this story. It's so awesome! Please update asap!
jen b chapter 8 . 7/7/2006
wow, this is really intriguing. i just started reading fanfic and this is definitely one of the better ones i've read. i love the whole spike-as-a-caring-father angle. love it! please write more chapters!
always-drifting-and-dreaming chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
Very intense chapter, and good all the same! Awesome song too!
DaPhoenix chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
Great Post.