Reviews for In Loco Parentis
TKB17 chapter 6 . 6/16
So, out of curiosity, why didn't Alex fight back? He'd probably have still lost, but he certainly would have gotten his licks in.

In general I have issue with your portrayal of Alex. You write him so passive. Yes, he's an introvert, but he's almost always stuck up for himself. The angst (well, this much angst) I do t really think fits him.
Teddybearcrazy chapter 18 . 6/15
O my God please update. I have read all your Alex rider story's and love reading them. I noticed in chapter seventeen you used 'you know?' Alot. I remember three or four of these in one chapter. One is awesome, two ok but three or four... getting a little repetitive, you know? There it is again. please update this soon, it would make my day!
animal lover13 chapter 18 . 6/14
I love what you have written so far. I know it's been a while since you last updated, but I hope you're able to soon.

keep writing
Alexriderfan chapter 18 . 5/7
Is this... The END!?
WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!?
No. Just No. NO chapter 18 . 4/12
I just checked in with this story again after a couple of years, to see if it ever got finished, and I'm glad I did! Or may not be finished, but it's certainly a great read still! It definitely stands up to my thoughts of it a few years ago as one of my favorite works in this fandom. The Alex-James-Cub-Wolf dynamic is a really interesting one, and I wish more people explored it thoroughly as you have. Again, this fic is a real pleasure to read!
Alexriderfan chapter 18 . 4/5
I'm welsh...
M-chanchen chapter 18 . 3/30
Hi,
I really hope that Alex has solved the bigger problems at least for a while out. He and the others deserve a break. I really enjoyed reading this. You did a amazing job at it. Well, I don't agree with your view of Jack because sometimes you can't express your feelings how you want to and everybody feels and expresses things differently. But if it was different, this story wouldn't work and it is fanfiction. Everybody can write and interprete it like they want to, so nobody has the right to forbid things like that. But I noticed that Alex mentioned to his teachers that he was staying with Wolf since his uncle's death. But Wolf doesn't know that he has to pretend that. There could be difficulties and complications with the school. This abuse thing isn't really from far away, I think, because the way you wrote it it seems that Alex was quite neglected back with Jack or Ian. But well done, this is really great.
Alexriderfan chapter 7 . 3/28
Good story. The only thing I don't like is that Alex smoked. I don't like the idea of sigarets and I think whoever invented them was crazy. (Plus Ian Rider would have a heart attack if he found out that Alex had smoked!)
AlexRiderFan chapter 6 . 3/28
Just so you know fox's name is Ben Daniels, but as this is a Fanfiction it doesn't really matter. Also the story is great!
YokaiAngel chapter 18 . 1/23
Oh wow~
Vice Fandonna chapter 18 . 1/10
Is this ever going to be updated soon or is this more or less on hiatus?
dorfchaosgenie chapter 18 . 11/8/2015
I would love to have an update for this really nice story of yours :) so many unanswered questions :O I need more :)
And a short reminder that you are indeed an awesome writer :)
Guest chapter 2 . 10/3/2015
Hey so, lovely story. Just dropping you a note to tell you how great it is and that I hope you update and also that "I was curious" is not something that you say in Spanish, in Spanish you HAVE curiosity not ARE curious. So the correct translation would not be "estaba curioso" with the verb to be estar, but rather "tenĂ­a curiosidad" with the verb to have Tener.
elizstrass chapter 18 . 7/30/2015
Amazing. No other way to describe it. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
scarlettmeadows chapter 17 . 7/13/2015
Aw! I was really loving this fic! Hope you continue it...
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