Your going to do a alter version of Eagle Strike and Scorpia? I've read Eagle Strike but I haven't read Scorpia yet. I'll have it on tuesday. I'll have to stop reading this sometime after the Eagle Strike busines. I don't want spoilers.

Like this very much. Good work. I'll read chapter five and then go to bed.(it's two in the morning for me right now) I will pick up the fanfic again tomorrow when I get home from church. I'm really liking this.

Really like this.

Spotted a typo or two but that's okay. We all make mistakes.

And jeez I feel almost as bad for this Tom guy as I do for poor Alex. My parents are divorced. I think kids with divorced parents are luckier than kids with parents that are together but hate each other.

I speak spanish fluently thank you very much. :) Though I'm sure there are plenty of people who don't. I sugest you translate while the conversation is taking place in spanish instead of in the authors note. Or you could do what Horowitz does and simply say that the conversation took place in spanish but still have it typed in english.

I don't know who this Tom person is. (does he come out in the series or is he an OC? I've only just finished Eagle Strike) But I find it hard to believe that Alex would actually tell someone at his school about his work with M16.

Also I think someone who is a SAS dude should be good at first aid. You know in case of injuries on the job?

Sorry if I'm being critical. I actually like this story very much so far. And judging by all the reviews you've gotten I'm not the only one who likes it. So keep up the good work.

um. update? or have you.. *dramatic pause*...abandoned...this?

yeah, so, barclays. *shakes head* i know. i know. i know it's hard. but you have to keep going, you know? well, i do anyway. :P

This story is amazing. But one thing I have to point out is that you make Alex seem a lot weaker than he is. You'd think he'd be able to fight back against a big oaf like Bear, who may be trained in martial arts (but is too much of an ass to be able to use them). But you portray everyone really well. I hope you don't mind me pointing out that Fox's real name is Ben Daniels, in case you don't know. Please continue this soon, if you don't mind.

hello! ILP is a great story, I love it.. well, actually, i love all your stories, so that's not really saying anything much. But I think this is one of your better stories. (what am i saying? ALL your stories are better!)

so anyway, basically this review is to ask - no, BEG - you to update (and soon!) so please do. i'm counting on you, dammit! *cough* yeah. update. :)

I like how you ended the chapter a little warmly and I like how Wolf and Alex are getting along now. I think you've captured Eagle, Fox, Wolf, Snake and Alex perfectly. I loved this chapter!

I love this chapter and I'm glad that the situation with Bear was solved. I think Alex should've been a little more hurt or something when he got beaten up by bear. I mean, he got shot and then someone beats him up and he could barely walk! Other than that, I think this was a good chapter!

I really do love this story and this chapter! I love how you brought up Eagle, Snake and Fox. I love them all and I think you've presented them brilliantly.

I love this story! And I think you're captured Alex and Wolf perfectly!

Surprisingly I liked this story, and I don't really like anything. NIce.

I so need more of this.

Can't wait for what's to come. Bear is still on the loose, right?

And will Alex really have an assignment while Wolfs gone? I'd say, yes, if that wouldn't mean we get a bunch of chapters without Wolf. ...personally, I wouldn't mind, but the story is basically about Alex and Wolf, right? hm... Well, I still hope you'll write an assignment. You'll probably find some awesome way to make the assignment connected with the SAS or something.

Right, um, sorry for maybe-bad English, not a native speaker! Hope you live a happy life! byeee!

Very well written and an AMAZING story line. I can't wait to read the rest!

Keep up the AWESOME work, Meg.

P.S. Is it just me or does Gloria? and Bear seem like they've going to team up and attach Alex on K-Units week away?

Wow this is an awesome story so I can't wait for the next chapter! )

Wow guess what!

So I got to the part in Spanish and after reading it I realized that I understood it perfectly so I was surprised and thought " what the h***" since when do I understand spanish! Then I remembered that I was born mexican and I've been here since I was 9 and I'm now 17... I'm not fully sure how to feel about this... Lol isn't that weird!

Anyways I love this story! )