|Reviews for Shiki no Uta|
| TheCatWithTheHat chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
This confused me. A lot. Was there something we are supposed to read before this? I think you should've made that more clear. I didn't understand it.
| VampireAreej chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
wHEN R they gonna KISS?
| ihatewriting chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
very good! there's not nearly enough ichiori fics out there
| DualWielder99 chapter 1 . 8/8/2006
Really nice fanfic, I liked it a lot especially because I'm a big IchiHime fan. I'm still a little confused about Setsu and Issou though. And I wanted to ask if you knew japanese because you a japanese name for Issou's zanpaktou, Kyoutaiyou (Great Sun), and I never quite figured out how accurately translate things from english to japanese, like peoples names and the names of zanpaktou's. Well, I really just wanted to say that I really enjoyed the fic and that you shold keep up the good work.
| IronicEnding chapter 1 . 7/27/2006
You know its very hard to come by any IchiOri fictions ever
Even harder to find any that are half-way good.
That is why i thoroughly applaud this and your works in general. Keep it up!
| Trueturbo chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
nice story although at the moment I'm far too tired to read all the previous stories, might have already though. anyway I ramble nice work I look forward to the conclusion
| HardlyFatal chapter 1 . 7/16/2006
The story is okay, but your original characters are distracting and add nothing to the story. Can't speak for everyone, but I read fanfic to see familiar characters interacting in new ways, not strange new Gary-Stu characters I know and care nothing about.
Also, "sweat dropped" is not a verb.
Overall, there's a feeling of contrivance throughout this, as if you were working hard to write something that was just a vehicle for your OCs instead of tell a tale of Ichigo and Orihime. Felt forced, instead of natural. Maybe if you let go of your ulterior motives and just wrote the story, it would flow better?
| Lady Light chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
| El Duque chapter 1 . 7/7/2006
I think that this is great, just like your other Ichigo x Orihime stories. Your first story might be the reason I adore this pairing so much. Another thing that is interesting: I usually don't care for stories that mix existing and original characters, but I like yours. You make it so I can care about them. It's obvious that these characters exist in your own consciousness already, which makes them able to be fleshed out and given a distinct voice. Finally, the suspense is killing me. Hurry up and write the next part, damn it!