|Reviews for Lollipop|
| Dawnaven chapter 1 . 10/28/2007
Funny funny! Wow, his hikari must really be dense, yeah? ...I don't know who Malik and Marik is...I guess I don't watch or remember Yu-Gi-Oh characters much...o_O
| NoaFuuma chapter 1 . 10/2/2007
cool! poor marik... i would've liked it if malik would've understood what marik was doing but this is also great! i like it very much so you go to my favorites. ja ne!
| Karma-I-Am chapter 1 . 9/28/2007
This is a really good start to the story. You should do more with it. :)
| Nevermore Marni chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
I KEEP TRYING TO TELL THEM BAKURA'S AN IDIOT! BUT NO DON'T LISTEN TO ME THE GIRL WHO'S BEST FRIEND IS MASSVLY OBBESES WITH HIM! NO I NO NOTHING ABOUT HIM BEING AN IDIOT! Great now I want lollipops...
| Kid9535 chapter 1 . 5/18/2007
HAHAHAHA, Marik, you can't seduce a guy by licking a freakin piece of metal...Even if Bakura DID tell you it would work...
| Iced Blossom2 chapter 1 . 9/23/2006
Hi lolz! (sorry, that term has been stuck in my head ever since my brother said it as a joke when we were at this haunted house to this supposed 'ghost' - it was frikkin' hilarious if i must say!) Anyway, you're so fantastic at writing the pairings i like! *glomps you*
| Tsuki-neko-chan chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
"Malik groaned knowing what was going to happen, here we go again."
Lol. Malik knows he's gonna get molested again D. Good work ]
| IamTerra chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
I liked this, go MarikxMalik forever!
| MyStIC MUshroOM chapter 1 . 8/11/2006
1 WORD: UPDATE.
Seriously, I mean it. Update. You need to! You'll get more reviews that way XD
You're doing a REALLY great job, and I support this pairing and Im sure a lot of people do too!
Try showing more of Yami Marik's 'attempts' t seduce Malik...make him have a rely hard time. Well wat can u expect, u DID say Malik was dense. _
(its just a suggestion, no need to follow it)
| Jynx101 chapter 1 . 8/5/2006
omg! That was so funny. You should write more of this asap!
| Mew Draiku chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
I liked it a lot! Malik x Marik is my ultimate favorite couple. (And making Malik dense and, basically, a "dumb blonde" is fun. xD) Good job! And if you can, please write more stories/chapters with Marik's attempts to seduce Malik.
| Yu-Gi-Ah 2.0 chapter 1 . 7/7/2006
_ Hehehehe! CUTE AND VERY FUNNY!
| koolmint26 chapter 1 . 7/7/2006
omg malik is so dense that idiot! wah marik just rape him already!
| MyFantasticNightmare chapter 1 . 7/7/2006
That was cute. I luved it. You should really continue it though. It would be awsome to see more of Marik's atempts and mabey finally getting what he wanted. lol, anyways it was awsome.
| Misura chapter 1 . 7/7/2006
I'm not sure whom I feel sorrier for, Malik or Marik. *grins* This was one fun read, with Malik acting like, well, a mother-hen, chiding Marik for begging for candy, while Marik's actual desires are a lot more uhm adult than Malik can guess. :D Loved to read this!