Reviews for Through Sickness and Health
TheMysteryGirl111 chapter 6 . 6/22/2013
Oh my gosh this is so good, I wonder what's going to happen next, PLEASE UPDATE!
narniadreamer1 chapter 6 . 6/2/2012
Plz update! This is really good I hope you know that don't give up on it
KMER79 chapter 6 . 3/23/2011
I love it! Please update soon!
flavumetrubrum chapter 6 . 6/25/2008
Um... I know it's been a long time since you've updated, and I don't know if you'll even see, but it would be very cool if you continued this story. I'm really enjoying it and would love to know what happens next.
mechanized-minotaur chapter 6 . 6/8/2008
Great! Update soon!
Princess in the Pea chapter 6 . 5/28/2008
interesting, i can't wait for the next chapter to find out what happens. it's very well written
FaPingMulan chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
Great story
Aya-Shoru chapter 6 . 7/30/2007
oh this is awesome please write more i really like it.
Duchess192 chapter 6 . 6/3/2007
Very unique story! I like it very much:) Looking forward to updates soon:)
Faithfulpurelight chapter 6 . 3/14/2007
EstellaB chapter 6 . 1/1/2007
Evil cliffhanger! Argh! Update! Etc!
Aqua Mage chapter 6 . 12/20/2006
Nice. Looking forward to more...
elecktrum chapter 6 . 12/14/2006
'What did you think? Did this chapter work?'

Yes, it works, very well in fact, but I for one would have liked it to be longer. This is the kind of adventure I live for, though, and I'm notoriously greedy for such things. The details of the scenery were pretty eerie and really enhanced the drama.

M-mm! love the angst, love the setting, love Edmund going to the rescue. I can't wait until he figures out where he is (I have my suspicions) and I really can't wait until he comes face-to-face with Peter again. Yum.
lilval06 chapter 5 . 12/13/2006
Well, a few constructive comments:

Your diction is a in places. Let me explain, your word choice doesn't fit in some places, like some of the things Peter and Edmund say don't fit their character.

And your plot needs to be a bit more devolped and more detailed. As of right now, i'm slightly confused as to what is happening. What you really need is more details about basically everything.

But I wouldn't be reviewing if I didn't like your story. I think you have a good start here, it just needs to be fleshed out a little.
Ava Rainna chapter 5 . 12/13/2006
oh how I love Ed and his temper ::sigh:: the boy really does know how to throw a tantrum...throwing everything in the tent like that! lol. And Peter not letting them kill Narnia through him...nice. Can't wait for more! :)
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