|Reviews for Troubles Melt Like Lemon Drops|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/21
My heart, ugh I loved this so much
| ArgentNoelle chapter 1 . 9/17
oh man! This was so good and perfect.
| whatswiththemustache chapter 1 . 7/9
Lovely! Thank you for writing :)
| It's-Nothing-Just-A-Wolf chapter 1 . 3/14
Oh my goodness this was so sad but touching!
I would love to see it continued!
| PSW chapter 1 . 3/9
This was a really nice story - I like the idea of Edmund and Lucy hanging out together ... I'm sure it happened a lot. And as for acting like children...well, really they are still, just a little older. Might as well enjoy it... :-)
Thanks for writing!
| MomoPeachFlower chapter 1 . 12/12/2016
Two of my absolute favorite things combined! This was brilliant !
| Error 742-Account Not Found chapter 1 . 3/4/2015
This warmed my heart :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2015
I loved it. I've always wanted older brothers that I could trust and be friends with - I'm the eldest so I am always wishing that I could be Lucy and have affectionate loving brothers and sisters. It was beautiful
| shadowphantomness chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
I thought I had reviewed that story but I was clearly mistaken. I really like all the details you put in this story - the handsome blonde Caspian look-alike with the dimples, the popcorn falling in Susan's hair, the sight of Edmund telling funny stories, and of course Peter coming home. Also, I loved all the Narnia-to-Wizard-of-Oz comparisons Edmund was doing. That was fun!
| InuGome chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
Awww, the longing . . . you can truly feel their longing in this fic. And for what? Quite a few things. Narnia, Susan (the old, real Susan with her gentle and loving Narnian heart), each other... Oh, so many! What Edmund said is quite true. They long, and they do kind of lose some things in this world; for they belong somewhere else. And that is why, somehow, the film they'd just watched fits them perfectly. I also do hope that dear Su finds her heart again someday. I totally love this moment they had with Peter near and up to the very end. Yes. As long as they walk side by side, hand in hand, heart to heart, they will make it there. Back to home- to their Real Home . . . in time. In Aslan's time.
Wonderful, heart-warming piece! Love it!
| Misty Blue chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
Oh, it was, Peter. It truly was. Haha!
Wow, I love this. Very funny, cute, sweet . . . everything nice and wonderful! Everything I love to read. Everything a Lucy/Edmund sibling-bonding fic should be! Truly. I personally believe that Ed and Lu have this kind of different bond than what they have with the older ones- Peter for Lucy, and Su for Edmund. I don't know if that's because of the fact that they're both the younger once, or something else. I always liked to think it is the latter, though. And my oh me, I must say, "The Wizard of Oz" fits the pevensies perfectly! I'm quite sure it is the kind of movie they'd really watch. Lovely movie, too. And great, awesome piece! You did an excellent job on it. From the characters to the story, love it!
| lookupandsee chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Your writing is gorgeous.
| Skandar-and-Georgie chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
This was absolutely gorgeous. How did I miss it? Why haven't I read it before? Thank you for this! Narnia Oz: magic. :)
| LolaJacob chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
Such a lovely story! Please keep writing!xx
| Gretta99 chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
Ahh... sibling fluff. It warms my heart. Thanks for sharing!