|Reviews for Sun Kissed|
| pronker chapter 20 . 3h ago
Obi-Wan and Anakin are both learning how love makes you stronger and bolder than ever before - nice characterization.
Oh, no, Shmi and Dejiak together *bites nails*
| Lai Charleaux chapter 20 . 3/14
NOOOOOOO NO NO NO OF ALL TIMES SHMI HAD TO GO TO TATOOINE RIGHT WHEN DEJIAK WAS THERE? NOOOOOOOOOoooooh my god this is going to hurt me so bad
But hey, the beginning of the chapter was so adorable and beautiful and bright! It's so fucking wonderful that Anakin is helping Obi-Wan just as much as Obi-Wan is helping him! Obi needs to stop this self-loathing RIGHT FUCKING NOW, and Ani is the best person to teach him how.
Oh, I love how bold Anaking is becoming towards touching Obi-Wan, and I absolutely adore the way Obi is responding! It's sad that there was no kiss in this chapte, tho. I was craving for that haha
Anyway, I'm so fucking happy you uptaded! Since I read this story I couln't stop thinking about it. I was afraid you'd take much more time to update, but here we are with chapter 20! Yay! But I can't wait for another one already asdfghjklç;sdjagh
| Anakin-Jason-Skywalker-Kenobi chapter 20 . 3/14
O_O Oh no... Hope that Anakin is able to save Shmi from Dejiak in time :( -AJSK
| the-writer1988 chapter 20 . 3/14
Oh, I really love the slow-build up between Anakin and Obi-Wan. I do hope they let their love out for one another soon. Both have had rubbish lives due to circumstances... It's about time they had some fun! How Anakin continues to not just take Obi-Wan then and there is - he has a lot of control! You have really made me love this pairing.
Uh oh... Dejiak has found something that could help him. I really hope he doesn't harm Shmi... I dread to think what he would do to her just to get to Anakin. In fact I dread to think about he would do to Obi-Wan when he eventually finds him ('cos really, he is going to have to, right? Eventually?)
| PlacateDrive chapter 20 . 3/14
Awesome chapter! The only negative thing I can think to say is that it is so short, but of course that's just because I want to read more and more!
| Sam-Chan and Jason-Kun chapter 20 . 3/13
| LostSoul1234 chapter 20 . 3/13
NOOOO! Not Shmi! Anakin's life is looking up, and now this bastard screws it up! I can't wait to see how his and Obi-Wan's relationship develops. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| MickeyMooseCaramel chapter 19 . 3/8
I'm not a ani/obi shipping person but this was just amazing!
| katchile94 chapter 19 . 3/6
Hey I really like this story. I love how Anakin is learning more about Obi-wan history, also their relationship is progressing really well. I also love how the story is not all about them. I hope you update soon.
| MaggieMcCartney chapter 19 . 3/2
This fic is amazing. I had never before thought of Obi Wan and Anakin as love interests, but this has very realistically made them perfect for each other. I love that you keep them in character. The writing is fantastic, and the plot is paced very well. Thank you for writing this!
| Limelight12 chapter 19 . 3/1
I stayed up until 3am reading this whole fic last night. It's just so great to know others ship Obi-Wan with Anakin. I loved your whole story and sincerely hope there will be more of it soon. My current Obi-Wan obsession is craving more :p
| Nyaow chapter 19 . 2/26
This is a great read, thanks for writing this! :D
I'm glad that Anakin and Obi-Wan are able to soothe each other's wounds, and Obi-Wan willingly suffering muscle cricks and blood-deprived-appendages for Anakin's good night worth of sleep is just adorable (I still think he treats Anakin like fragile glass though). Does this mean that they're going to be sleeping together for the foreseeable future? ;D
Will Anakin eventually top Obi-Wan? (I can see him overcoming the Sexual Intimacy hurdle, but being at the receiving end? A whole new can of worms there.)
The consistent foreshadowing of Ventress and her lack of an apprentice keeps me wondering who she will eventually take in as an apprentice. At the moment, I'm thinking it'll be Anakin, Zett or Dejiak. But. Dejiak. Ugh. I don't even want to consider the implications. Ugh.
Anyways, I'll be faving this story, and be looking forward to this next chapter! :)
| Lai Charleaux chapter 19 . 2/24
Oh God. Oh God, this story is so beautiful. I admit, I was looking for some plotless porn when I came here, but this piece of fiction is SO MUCH MORE. I thought 'hey, with Anakin being a slave and all, this is going to be full of sex and kinks and darkness' and so I went on to read it, but I never expected to get so emotionally invested in it. You gave me way way way more than what I was expecting.
For starters, you described Anakin's fragility perfectly. You made him frail and scared and broken, yes, but he keeps fighting, even when in vain. He needs lots of help, but he hasn't given up. He's still in character.
That thing with the minuscule cage, the cold and sheer fear of what was going to happen to him made my heart sink. His complete confusion towards Obi-Wan's kindness also gave me a heartache. But what surprised me the most was Anakin's utter shock at the careless way Obi-Wan wasted water. It got me completely off-guard. I hadn't realized how important something as simple as water was to slave from Tatooine. That was when I really understood how poorly he had lived until now, and the storm episode just made it even more proeminent. (btw, his awe at the rain was so adorable. god, I want to hug him!)
Other thing that surprised me was how you turned Obi-Wan into something other than a Jedi. Maybe he has failed, and his hurt because of that is heartwrenching, but you made it clear it was the Force's way to make him find Anakin. He had full potential to become a warrior, but he had a greater task to do (and I assume this task, which became a little clearer with this last chapter, has to do with taking Anakin to the Council so they can use him as a bait to defeat Ventress definitely, right?). I like how that doesn't lessen Obi-Wan's ability in one bit, and actually kind of does the opposite.
I also love how you made Anakin's suspicions slowly fade away to the point where he started trusting Obi-Wan entirely. His confidence became stronger, his cheekyness came back, his smiles were more frequent and I could almost feel Obi-Wan slowly falling for him. Oh, Obi-Wan himself starting to let his guard down was beautiful too. Their relationship developed in a way that they're brightening each other's day, and you made that so clear and wrote it so well that I'm amazed. (those lessons on swimming were perfect. just... heartwarming, adorable and completely perfect.)
Oh, another thing I'm in love with is the light comedy you're inserting here and there through the story. I swear I lost my shit at the 'there's a green troll on the couch' and the 'are you a virgin?' parts, and I also adored Ani deliberately ignoring Obi-Wan's lecture on the beach because he was too busy thinking of Obi-freckles (Obi-freckles! this is so adorable omg asdfghjklasdf) it's a great break from all the drama and hurting the characters are facing and trying to leave behind.
And Anakin and Obi-Wan's first kiss was so desperate. Anakin was so desperate. To think that the simple freedom to wank himself would evoke such memories... and oh god, the memories. The abuse. I want to hug Ani forever. He deserved so much better! God, he was a kid! And Obi-Wan knows a bit of it now, since he saw and felt some fragments. He better let go of his stupid 'no attachment' rule once and for all, because what Anakin needs the most right now is a safe and caring relationship.
Now, another fantastic trait of this story is that it has an actually plot. There's the main couple relationship development thing, which is happening slowly but marvellously, but then there's an ACTUAL plot involving other characters. There's Dejiak (the son of a bitch) obsessively looking for Anakin, there's the Sith, and there's Ani's mother, and you're managing to develop and tie all of this together in a brilliant way. It's so rare to find a fanfiction like this. I'm loving it.
By the way, I'm so thankful that you didn't forget about Shmi! To be honest when you started describing the handmaid's bittersweetness towards Organa's baby I didn't even think of Anakin's mother. I actually started to think the maid would do something crazy to the baby girl like kidnap her or even kill her, and that somehow it would have to do with Ani later. But then BAM, the maid was Shmi thinking of Anakin! I was so surprised and so happy at the same time! She's aliiiiive, oh god askjdghasjkg I only wish Ani knew that. Damn Windu for not telling Qui-Gon about him!
But oh god, this story is so perfect. It's much more deeper than I thought it would be. You write wonderfully, and you've managed to make all characters be perfectly in character. Please, pleeeease don't stop writing this fic! I was kind of scared to start reading a story that was first posted in 2006 and is not finished yet, but the fact that you updated three months ago convinced me it was worth the uncertainty and probable wait for new chapters. I definitely don't regret it, but I really hope you keep writing this, even if you do it slowly. It's such a great story! I'm dying to know how Ani will find his mother, and if Windu's plan will work, and if (when, I hope) Anakin and Obi-Wan will finally have sex asjkdghkalsjdg
Well, I'm really looking foward to the next chapter. Oh, and I'm sorry for my bad English, this review is probably full of mistakes.
Can't wait for an update!
PS.: I loved the almost-sex scenes. I love how Obi-Wan cannot avoid desiring the boy, and how he even dreamed of having sex with him (that scene was hot as hell). I loved Ani's masturbation scene. I loved how Obi-Wan hesitated to kiss Anakin back on both occasions, but then just couldn't not do it. Oh my, this fic is making me ship them so hard asdfghjklasdfgh Thank you for that! Thank you for writing this beautiful, adorable and yet sexy story!
| Crow T. Author chapter 19 . 1/13
Yay, you've updated! I'm so happy. This is a really good chapter, having Anakin begin to learn more about Obi-Wan's past and about the Jedi, as well. I hope we're going to find out why Obi-Wan was passed over. I suspect there is some excellent story coming!
| FemaleSpock chapter 19 . 12/1/2013
I really like the conversation that Aadi and Anakin have regarding the Jedi Order- it really throws a light on how morally problematic much of what they do is. Looking forward to seeing how Mace's plan turns out as well.