|Reviews for The Loss of a Loved one|
| Morbid Darkness chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
Here's the truth:
story is interesting,a very good idea and I think you should 's no reason not to.
And I didn't like it that much cuz I'm a yaoi fan and this one is Kai/Hilary...
I presume you wanted to pair up Hiro and her in the next chapters...maybe she'll meet Tyson who will fall for her and be jelaous of Hiro...and so on..
But I think you should continue :)
| inner-emerges chapter 1 . 12/24/2006
dn't stop keep on!
listen let her find a new love
as u said a mericale, : kai comes back 2 life, sees her with another man then ... it is up 2 u
| HalcyonMoments11 chapter 1 . 10/13/2006
I thought it was awesome! you should definately continue! It would make a great story, a sad but a toughing one! It's definately a big turn from ur AIM stories lol! They were hilarious! anyway please continue!
| venus-aurr chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
OMG! NO KAI DON'T GO! I need you in my stories! :(
That was so sad...WAAHH! Sorry for the late review...
But this story was so...sad...and..moving...
| whyamidoingthis01 chapter 1 . 7/8/2006
I really liked this, and even though it is great writing with a great story, I think that it should be kept a one-shot. Your writing gives the reader enough detail for them to know the fact, but it also allows them to think about what else happened that was not said in the story. This is, without a doubt, one of the top, if not the best one shot I have ever read in the history of fanficton.
| Lioness Of the fire chapter 1 . 7/8/2006
don't go i love you
| simone chapter 1 . 7/8/2006
omg how do you always write such good stories?, this story is so good, you should contiinue it