Reviews for Melancholy
dark lil'angel2be chapter 11 . 9/17/2013
SWEET! Omg, i really loved it! So sweet! I wonder what happened to Sora and Nanime (i hope i spelled her name right)
I Falling Rose I chapter 3 . 12/10/2011
awsome story
Dreamgirl175 chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
Can you please contiu
fuyuhiko chapter 11 . 3/30/2011
I'll give my honest opinion on this story.

It was okay.

But not what I would consider 'good'.

There was no character development, and it moved too quickly. I mean, Roxas finds out that his girlfriend was cheating on him, then five seconds later he asks Kairi out. ...What? Wouldn't it make sense for him to be sad and everything?

And the part where Sora kissed Kairi and Roxas saw was TOTALLY just thrown in there. It was unnecessary and just plain stupid.

To make a long review short?

It was bad.
Guest chapter 11 . 4/26/2009
OMG! the ending made me cry, bravisimo! great story!
Maika Akarui chapter 11 . 4/15/2009
Aw! This story is so cute! Wonderful!

Concerning Sora and Namine... yeah, I find Namine annoying, and Sora is just... well... weird.

I'm also a fan of Roxiri. I love them together! Thanks for making this great story! _
James Gea chapter 11 . 10/12/2008
Oh Helena

cutie pie :)
Reviewer chapter 11 . 1/20/2008
Amazing ending. What can I say. :)
Reviewer chapter 5 . 1/20/2008
Not to criticize you, but you should write longer sentences rather than sentence fragments; it just sounds more connected.
Reviewer o.o chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
Amazing

:3
Leah chapter 10 . 10/16/2006
LOVED the ending!So sweet!

I love ROXAS
Kikakudaii chapter 6 . 9/12/2006
Aw, phooey. Spark gone, eh?

So sad.

I love the ice cream shop!
Princess of Heart chapter 11 . 8/18/2006
That was so fudgin good!WRITE MORE STORIES!(sorry i'm so excited),
AKiRA chapter 11 . 8/7/2006
Very nice ending.

YOu know, I just got married to my wonderful wife.

:) I do wish to see you continue writing.

Good luck!
kai-kai01 chapter 10 . 7/28/2006
omg! that was so cute and romantical (lol i know im weird) you rock! this was awesome! *gives you 3 enormous cookies* sorry i couldnt review the other chapters
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