|Reviews for To Give Up Forever|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/30
Oh my God this is so depressing. Beautifully written but so so heartbreaking.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
i always knew Shadi was a bastard I mean if he didn't even tell marik about yami marik would have never tried to kill yugi!
| Atemu-chan chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
you should make a sequel pretty please ...with atemu on top ..? XD
| Rubellite Game chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
this should have been a tradgity instead of angst...
| Dastardly Intent chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
To be honest with you, I didn't really like that song Iris before I read your story, but I will think of Puzzleshipping whenever I hear it from now on.
I really liked this, you recreated Atemu's personality so perfectly.
The ending honestly took me by surprise, but I believed it. If that makes sense.
| yayubaru1 chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
... the ending made me tear up poor yugi poor atemu but you i must say are a very good writer.
| yugioh chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
Oh you are so ebal. You make them look like will be together but then Atemu will be a ghost that linger on the earth forever.I wonder for how many century you wanabe more ebal and tourture their love,make him suffer by making yugi reincarniate many times but already forget about Atemu hahaha (Is like watching yugi and keep remembering all those time they together but cant touch him ...and then be avanger wokeup in hell or something hahaha) that was pure ,is great,I didnt cry,maybe bacause my heart are cold and I kinda love sad yeah,nice work.
| PrincipalCellist chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
I am crying. Why am I crying? *wipes eyes*
This was such a sad story! I loved it, but I hated the ending! Atem can't leave! Not after they...*blushez* uh...well...you know.
Gr8 story! *smiles* Byez! I'm off to visit the grave site where Kazuki Takahashi buried his dignity after 4shits muddled YGO! *skips away*
| accallia chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
This... this... was one of the most depressing things I've read in so long. Just... not the agony of death, or the desperation of something equally horrible... but something somehow worse. You've made it so one can feel joy, and then pain. The ghost of eternal torment. And then I go look up Iris... and remember the movie I saw so long ago... you're too cruel.
But, I can't help but love you for it. You've done something wonderful here. To make the reader feel something to such a degree; if you work at this, you can do something incredible.
| xXxX-Live.Laugh.Love-XxXx chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
Damn, this made me sob. A lot. Unbelievably sweet and touching.
| emma chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
it was brilliant
| CAYMovedOn chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
| yakuri-moe chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
Well I'll be f*cking damned, I really REALLY liked this story but at the same that I hate it so much, that was one heart breaking ending. Now I'm all upset because I can't even hate you or the story since I enjoyed reading it, now I'm so AGH~!
Gosh I can't even begin to describe it, it was all kinds of awesome. Now this may not be to your liking, but I'll be damned if I don't fall on my knees with tears in my eyes and beg you to write a little second chapter or anything, ANYTHING, that allows Yuugi to be with Atemu (even if they both have to wander the earthy realm as spirits).
I know I can just imagine it, but this is your story, I can imagine an elf with a choco coronet on the head who marries them in fairy land. But it is your choice, the story is good as a stand-alone.
I strongly suggest you not to take this review so seriously, since I tend to curse when I'm feeling strong emotions (both good and bad) and I'm sleep deprived. I have to confess this story leaves me in that position of loving something so much you can't kill it.
| moriah93ohio chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
That was a good story. It was reallu sad and didn't reallu have a happy ending, but good nonetheless. Great story!
| XShootingStarX chapter 1 . 8/12/2007
wah! you made me cry! poor poor atemu...poor poor yugi. god daammit all, i want my happy ending! will you consider a seqeul. even though this is very good, i want them to be together and happy T.T