Reviews for The Beating Heart
Azurite chapter 5 . 1/11/2007
Still here! I did expect a confrontation of sorts, but not quite how you'd written it. I guess I'm looking forward to more action like we've seen in past chapters.

This chapter had a few spelling and grammar errors, including randomly capitalized words, periods in places where commas should have been, and that one oddly parenthetical "that." Despite those, I could still read and enjoy the story. Keep up the good work.
When All Else Fails-Create chapter 5 . 1/10/2007
Ooh, Norrington got burned, hahaha!

Wonderful chapter. Keep up the good work!
Unikorn chapter 5 . 1/10/2007
And I thought that he had green eyes. Either way, it doesn't matter. You got your point across.
Bejipan chapter 5 . 1/7/2007
Nice story! Looking forward to updates. :)
Alana84 chapter 5 . 1/3/2007
Finally a new chapter which was great btw!

Can't wait to find out what's going to happen so please update soon again...
sonnM2 chapter 4 . 12/2/2006
Heisman sounds kinda very gross. but she killed him! lil old liz killed him. hmm. interesting. very good stuff i dare say. just out of curiosity, you're not going to leave this unfinished are u? (i see u haven't updated in a few months - though i cant speak :S) ? i hope u dont. its very good.


- jack's pirate lass
nina chapter 1 . 9/11/2006
When will you update? soon i hope.
SparrabethLove06 chapter 4 . 8/17/2006
Love it, please update? :)
Creativity Demon chapter 4 . 8/17/2006
awesome story, very unique, looking forward to more!
doesn't live here anymore chapter 4 . 8/17/2006
Wow, I thought Elizabeth was full of surprises in the movie, she's even better in the story.
Alana84 chapter 4 . 8/11/2006
Awesome story, it's very well written, love the plot as well as your characterization of Elizabeth and the other characters as well!

Of course I wonder who Elizabeth is gonna end up with? Hopefully Jack/Elizabeth!

Plz update soon...
ReeseAnn chapter 4 . 8/10/2006
EEP! that was scary but very good writing!
crystal-flame-12290 chapter 4 . 8/5/2006
cant wait to read more! love it! update soon -
Forever03 chapter 4 . 8/4/2006
awesome story i can't wait to read more!
Unikorn chapter 4 . 8/4/2006
This is well-written... but grim... I suppose there won't be any of the humor one usually expects? 'Tis alright, not all tales are of the comedic type...
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