|Reviews for Who Is It?|
| Chaseha-Wing chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
U DON'T JUST MARRY PEOPLE LIKE THAT! I mean, where's the dates, the fights, U JUST CAN'T PROPOSE LIKE THAT, and ur speech was weird in this one. Every time the guys talked, it sounded awkward. Nice start, bad ending (sorry for the harsh criticism)
| hellzboy chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
I knew it was a mirror! XD though I was kinda surprised about the whole 'Will you marry me' sentence definitely didn't see that one coming but that was a sweet way to propose~ XD I very much liked your one-shot hehehe
| Henry The HAP chapter 1 . 1/3/2007
I liked your story, but I must also agree with SpottedShadow2947. There are some spelling mistakes, and you have a slight tendency to change the time of the happenings. The story is also quite rushed, there are few details, and I think you should read through your text and think; 'is this clear enough to people who are going to read this?' or 'Could I maybe thicken out the text in this area?' I'm not saying that I myself am the perfect writer and that I follow these questions, most likely I'm far from a good writer, but that's what the Reveiw Submitting is for; so that we can say what we liked and what a person could take into consideration next time they decide to write a story. You're a great and imaginative writer, and through constructive critisism and practice you can only improve on the small mistakes you make in the beginning, and make your stories better.
I hope my reveiw has been of some help, and I did enjoy reading your story.
| xSuperxXerox chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
*crys like niagara falls* that was so cute. i loved that ending. omg niagara falls has just been made inside my house. *crys x10 crys*
| AnimeQueen48 chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
The idea is so cute! I love the whole mirror thing. But I do however think that it went rather fast consistering Rei didn't even know that Kai liked him to start. But it was very cute.
| Maci-bby chapter 1 . 7/10/2006
aw...how cute! :') i'm cring tears of joy! LOL! it was great! i loved it!
| SpottedShadow97 chapter 1 . 7/10/2006
*sniffle* That was SO sweet! I absolutely loved it! - But...Can I give some constructive critisism? Wording. It's a big pet peeve for me. Sorry. Awesome job anyway!
| blankdotblankdotblank chapter 1 . 7/10/2006
This is very cute, I loved it! Where are they that they can get married? Just wondering.
| hoshicat chapter 1 . 7/10/2006
aw that was so cute! although wouldnt it be a little early to be getting married since the story didnt imply tht they had been dating. But also you realy got me there for a second i thought it was someone else! but great story!
| Black-Dranzer-1119 chapter 1 . 7/9/2006
that was really cute, i like lots. lol
| Katsutoshi96 chapter 1 . 7/9/2006
MI! :3 I wuved it!
| TalaBryanLover chapter 1 . 7/9/2006
(crying)That was should keep writing Beyblade fanfics.
| Musette Fujiwara chapter 1 . 7/9/2006
I don't have words to describe what I thought about your story...
I liked it...