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I am going to review every single chapter tomorrow

Oh my gooood i love this so muuuch. Please don't let this story end here, you have to continue it because it's so amazing and the chemistry between them is so raw and strong and real 3 you are an amazing writer and I had a really good time reading this. You sense of humor is impressive, good job

for now? FOR NOW?! omg if you make a sequel i HAVE to read it!

dude this was a great read! the banter, the gradual feelings, it was such a ride! thank you for making me love these two! thank you for writing, sharing, and finishing! so cool!

Oh. My. God. This was fucking glorious. So hot. So emotional. You have made me adore this ship even more! Your writing is very witty and humorous and I absolutely loved the back and forth banter between Kisame and Sakura. And the smut...damn, that was so steamy and passionate. Seriously fantastic work! Soooo beautiful. Definitely now one of my favorite fics!

Will be really excited with a sequel to this story. Love the humor, the action and the chemistry between the 2 leads. Is great you kept the real action to the last 2 chapters and the rest is the slow build up of hot and steamy tension; increasing the pleasure of reading ten folds. Great work!

I've got this stupid little image in my head of Sakura and a bunch of Leaf ninjas stumbling across Kisame at some later point and a fight breaking out, only for him to take a swing with his sword and have it just... harmlessly bounce off Sakura's blocking arm as she ducks in to defend someone, leading to the whole fight just grinding to a halt because none of the Leaf ninjas have any idea how to react to the massively dangerous S class missing nin suddenly ignoring them to get into an argument with his sword.

"Oh, come on! It was one time! ONE TIME! When I'm SWINGING YOU at someone you're NOT supposed to help them! No! I don't care! We're in the middle of something, here, you're not supposed to be playing favourites!"

So. This story...

I don't mind it. It's definitely not great (sorry!) due to the rather forced nature of the relationship (what with Sakura COMPLETELY and CONSTANTLY ignoring the whole 'he is going to kill me, my friend, anyone around my friend, and also any random people he ever comes across because he is a mass murdering psychopath' thing in favour of 'he looks hot therefore I am unable to control myself'), but you DO write well and it was DEFINITELY entertaining.

It's one of the very few stories that manage to break the forth wall without breaking the mood of the story itself. You balanced that out VERY nicely!

Also, it's a bit disappointing that it ended where it did because it kind of leaves open the whole 'Sakura has almost no chakra regeneration' issue that seems like a huge problem for her life (though it's great that you actually gave it an ending, especially with how long it all took!). Still, the actual story you were writing was completed well, regardless of questions left unanswered.

Like, whatever happened to Sakura's squirrel? Will it find its way back to her in Konoha? Will the poor thing remain stranded, soaking and bedraggled and muddy stuck in some mosquito infested swamp for the rest of its life and never again know the comfort and safety of a warm konoichi's cleavage? Is the squrrel to be Kisame's rival?!

So many drastically important question that needed answering...

Everything about this story from beginning to end is absolutely beautiful.

I loved the fanfiction, I hope the next chapter, take care by bye

also I hope hes okay and things for failing.
obviously

also

this is was actually wow.
emotional , holy smokes.

his surprise and gratitude and or disbelief and her joy and softness awww.

badass

DEAR GODS. this is amazing. i like the way you convey them, their voices (they even have e.g. different senses of humour though snark is shared and sarc) and actually yeah the UST and oddly feels and romance/sexy times with bonds. like its not hollow somehow, they have a bond.

which is cool.

and their characterisations the way you did it was epic.
also kisames eyes OMG

also i wonder what would have happened had sakura chosen to go to wind and like escaped. eventually. or kisame coming to konoha...hm. potential there. anywho, its a nice open ending!

Please tell me you have a sequel.- if not ill live dw dw but im checking because omg. and if not well, its a nice open ending tbh.

also on the reread totally will review but dayuuuum.

thanks

Aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. it's so good. kinda made me cry on some parts.

I swear this book is literally everything I never thought about this ship. Now its kinda really cute. Sayonara author-chan. Until weeet again.

I just realized this is Stockholm syndrome in a cute way