Reviews for The Watch
BuzzyBumbleBee13 chapter 16 . 8/18/2019
This fic is problematic


Holy fuck what the fuck.

I don't mean to be too rude, and I'm not sure how old you were when you wrote this or if you take any criticism but.

You brushed over SO many problematic topics here. Including (but not all being) rape, thoughts of forcing another to sexually pleasure you, SPEAKING to OTHERS of taking advantage of someone. The whole entire situation with Russel, seriously what the fuck was that whole arc. And just- so much.

This was a really hard fic to read, which is really disappointing considering the premise sounded really interesting.

I'm sure by now maybe you'll look back on this and see the mistakes but, I still hope you have a great morning, Author.
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 16 . 2/9/2019
Nice Happy ending. So Roy had to say it out loud to him? Oddly specific. Faving this!
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 2 . 2/9/2019
Why only 2 months?
LoreenaLaufeyson chapter 16 . 5/20/2017
Good job! ;)
Thinking-Of-A-Dream chapter 16 . 3/15/2017
this was an absolutely brilliant story!
Guest chapter 16 . 2/9/2017
it was soooo cute :3
thanks for sharing your amazing story with us!

it world have been better with lemons though X3

Guest chapter 12 . 2/9/2017
it annoys me that people thought (or maybe still do think) you stole this. your plot if based on the myth of a genie in a bottle/lamp, you can't help that someone also based there story on the same myth.

that would be like claiming someone stole your story simply because they both had mermaids in... if they are both based on the same legend/fairytale/myth then theres going to be similarities. can't be helped.

lol sorry for the rant, people just make me mad sometimes.
ANYWAY! im loving this! :D
its sooo cute and fluffy X3
just like a lil bunny (or

Guest chapter 2 . 2/9/2017
im only a little way through, but holy cow! O_O it looks amazing already!

i think im going to love this one :3

Eimin chapter 3 . 6/11/2016
I have seen this storyline before on FFN under Gundam Wing called the Medallion. The author set a pretty high bar. I will be interested to see your take on it.
khgsjh chapter 13 . 4/4/2016
ASL-Pirates-Lover chapter 16 . 10/23/2015
i think that was the best Royed fic i have ever read! It was AMAZING! Awesome job Lemur! ;)
KkChibiChop chapter 16 . 6/21/2014
Yay! This story was so darn cute! I love, love, loved all of it! So sweet and it was such a traditional fairy tale but new!
Btw, I love Beauty and the Beast! It is my all time favorite fairy tale so I loved how you slipped in a reference to it!
I liked how you worked the automail into the modern setting. The Jean x Russ pairing was cute and I absolutely loved the way you wrote AL!
Great story overall! XD
IceBlueFoxFire chapter 16 . 5/29/2014
Awesome story! Wish there was more AU Roy/Ed stories as good as this one! (Or cannon stories as good as this one for that matter.)
Sentimentalstories chapter 3 . 2/4/2014
This story sure is funny D can't wait to read more!
ThugSeme chapter 16 . 8/29/2013
That was probably the most original FMA fanfic I've read so far (and I've read some...'unique' stuff..) Frankly, it was adorable and thank you for not making Russe ll evil in the end, 'cause I just can't stand the thought of him being a rapist. :( But it worked out! The Russell/Havoc pairing was unexpected, but cute nonetheless. It came as a surprise to me when you mentioned in an AN that you come up with this as you go, because I have seen one or two authors take FOREVER planning out every little detail for their fics and it still doesn't come out quite as good as this one. Anyway, I loved this story and will be checking out some of your other fics. Great job :)
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