|Reviews for Walking Through Fire|
| I love Siberian tigers chapter 5 . 11/12/2012
So what happens next?
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/16/2007
i forgot to say - i love the chapter titles :) made me laugh
| atmii chapter 5 . 9/16/2007
wow - fantastic story! I've missed your writing these last few years :) It's an original idea - a little bit of a stretch from Takahasi's storyline (soul-stealers being that powerful, etc) but it fit well and no one was OOC. And anyway, most of Takahashi's manga seems to delve into obscure and far-fetched scenarios, so don't think of that as a complaint.
for critisism - it seems a bit odd that Kagome can't remember anything. I mean, yes, after she lost her soul, that makes sense, but the fact that she was willing to give her soul up? The "evil, victorius smile" that Kikyo had? I felt it odd that she didn't remember that, for it seemed as if the uneasiness she got from that smile was her last coherent thought. Also - Miroku's happiness about the Kazana was a bit shortlived? A bit more SanMir would be nice, especially now that Kohaku is back and the Kazana's gone.
Kagome's gut feeling that the fight btw IY and Kouga was "wrong/ different" was a bit, i dunno, not sincere enough?
On the whole, it was awesome. The kiss was fantastic, the group reactions to her vegetative state were phemonmenal, and the soul-stealer idea was really unique.
I'll wait for the epilogue and whatnot, but don't feel pressured. There was no evil cliffy and it can end there and not seem unfinished. Wait double negative - it can end there and seem finished. Haha :)
| J Luc Pitard chapter 5 . 6/24/2007
What a wonderful story! Not big on Kikyou bashing, but the slight bit in this fic works because you leave her involvement just vague enough for either side (pro or anti Kikyou) to claim. I do like the image of the two mikos fighting together and defeating Naraku with their power. I also like the explanation of the soul collector having been part of Naraku and being able to exist in either world. Nice detail work.
| Quentin B. Caulfield chapter 5 . 4/11/2007
I must say, that has to be one of the BEST Inuyasha finale stories that I have read in a while - and trust me, I have read many, both good and bad.
Relatively short and to the point - I lreally enjoyed how you didn't beat around the bush or drag out (for an unnecessarily long time) the final decision between Kikyo and Kagome. It was a refreshing touch. Especially considering all the major hints that Takahashi gives un in the series, I was pleased to see that you neither gave us a long unneeded summary or drew out the confrontation.
Major points for originality.
A very nice piece of work, I must say again.
| Inudaughter chapter 5 . 1/8/2007
wow. uses some of the traditional fanfic plotlines but I have never seen it better used.
| MelonCoke chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
do you realize you have written 56 stories? i mean i love them and all (especially people involved) but wow... i'm starting to wonder if you have a life? lol
but yeah... keep up the good work? and go outside!
love you though!
| Lady Tomboy chapter 5 . 11/12/2006
wow, I must say a great story so far even if it's almost over. I think it's awesome how you portrayed them and well everything that was going on in the anime so well. I haven't read the manga, maybe I should look it up since the anime seems to stay at what it is now :( but I really love this story. And that without really taking em out of character. My compliments :) Good luck with the epilogue :) Hope to be able to read your conclusion soon thnx for an awesome story :)
| scuppers-the-dog chapter 5 . 9/5/2006
i thought your chapter title was ingenious
| Newbie GK chapter 5 . 8/31/2006
This was an absolutely wonderful chapter! It never ceases to amaze that only thing more consistent than their fights with one another is their love for each other. Great story! I also wanted to mention that the M/S scene was a nice bonus. I look forward to reading the epilogue.
| oOkag147Oo chapter 5 . 8/26/2006
ah what? just an epilogue and its over! NO! NO! this story is my strength its that and more its my conscience my hope its my future and its also my weakness
simply put..this story is my life!
-haha sound familier?
but seriously i love it
its so awsome youve done such a just amazingly awsome job im so jelouse! err
yup well i pretty much cryed at the end of this chapter! im sad its almost over! you better keep those inuyasha fan ficts comeing or i might just die...so yeah you have a life at stake! :D
cant wait for the next update! im so excited. huum? lemon perhaps hahahah just kidding but yeah update soon!
love the story
love the auther!
| Kawaii-CherryWolf chapter 5 . 8/23/2006
ohh my tummy is all fluttery! Honestly I'm in tears it was soo heartwarming! wonderful job! UPDATES SOON!
| drake220 chapter 5 . 8/22/2006
melting! i'm melting! loved this chapter! beyond sweetness, it was just everything you would hope the ending would be. ahh! i love love and you did this SO well. i have the happy butterflies in my stomach! great chapter!
| Mashy Merch chapter 5 . 8/21/2006
ready? one, two, three, "aw"
| Ravencries chapter 5 . 8/21/2006
A very short fic, but I loved it still. so does he stay in the past or do they go to her world to live?