Reviews for The Invisible Man
Smile Black chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
That was really sweet :)
delete-account-please 5149757 chapter 1 . 11/23/2013
excellent story it was very cute.
delete-account-please 4171342 chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
Good story it was very cute.
Deep24Blue chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
Oh please continue this! I want to know if someone accidentally stumbles upon them! Excellent work
goldacharmed chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
Awww! So sad! Why does it have to be so sad! Great story!
delete-account-please 742011 chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
this is thebestestfriendsforever just moved to a different account.

good story liked it.
Lmb111514 chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
This was great!
wisecurledqueen chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
I like how you tied Richard's piece with this one. The part about lost chances made me cry. Thank you.

-curledruler
LadyKryptonite294 chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
That was beautiful! I really loved it, especially the end How cute would it have looked to see Jason sat on his lap cleaning his glasses )

Cee xx
thebestestfriendsforever chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
cute little story.
KrisEleven chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
Good job! One thing I noticed was that at the beginning you use 'he was aware' twice really close together, which makes it awkward to read. Other than that, structure was perfect. I liked the inside little thoughts of what was making him sad- that was really good.

KrisEleven~
crusnik O2 chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
AWW! Jasons SO cute!

I was going to review to the other story, But for some reason it wouldn't let me... :(

bye bye! :)

your little sis, crusnik
Alphie chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
GAH! How do you do this? I love these fics of yours. LOVE THEM. And you put Jason on his lap saying he wants to grow up like Superman... pull at my heart strings why don't you!
MyDirtyLittleSecret chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
Again, that is the cuteness. I loved it. Poor Clark.
Sweet Irony chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
Those two get along so well!
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