Reviews for When Sally Met Jack |
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![]() ![]() ![]() My favorite part from this fic is how innocent Sally is (Innocent, yet not silly, as she keeps pursuing for answers) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd certainly like to see this story from Jack's point of view. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man, the first chapter was utterly hilarious! I just about died when Sally made the mix-up. And then having her faint, I couldn't stop laughing. The second chapter made me want to hug Sally for finally standing up to Finklestein. What was he thinking? Once something like this starts, NOTHING can stop it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You Write fantastically.x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ho-ly-CRAP! THis is WONDEFUL! Keep writing please I want to hear more of the story, and if it's over Write more! (sheepish grin) I don't want it to end! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your take on Jack and Sally's first meeting! You've captured the characters perfectly. Particularly Jack. He's exactly how I imagine he would be: graceful and pleasant, but impressive with authority. It's so sweet and believable the way you wrote this, they were instantly enamored with each other. Please, please continue the story, I want to know what happens next! |
![]() ![]() Oww this fic is like the cutest thing i ever read! But is this the end? Oh please continue :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Congratulations. You have just made me very happy. :D This makes perfect sense... I mean, it sounds exactly like something that would have happened. I LOVE it. I want to accept it as canon now. -grins- -gives jelly baby- Thank you so much for writing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes please. :P Oh look, it is. Brilliant. :D This is loveliness. And that makes me very happy. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read this a while back on a whim. Took me quite a while to find it again. I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, god, this thing made me giggle and squeal so much I think I pissed off my parents. XD Everyone is in character, and I love how deep you delve into Sally's inner thoughts and feelings. It's just so sweet and 'aww' worthy. :) Faved! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A beautiful take on how they could have met. Absolutely lovely, five stars! D |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a lovely story. I loved how annoyed the doctor was when Sally and Jack were staring at each other. This story really did make my heart flutter. It's too bad it was so short! I wish I had a thousand chapters! Hehe. Well, thank you for taking the time to write something so marvelous. -Naty. |
![]() ![]() omg! i love this! can u plz write some more of it...i wanna find out wats gonna happen! :( plz... |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a delightful story of Sally's first meeting Jack! I really enjoyed this. You wrote everyone very well, their interactions. “We scare people . . . because deep down inside of them . . . they want to be scared.” A slow grin crept its way across Jack’s skull and something changed in his expression. “That . . . that is a very good answer.” Sally gazed back at him with a smile. She had never been so proud in her life! She wished that Jack would visit every day, or maybe she could visit him . . . I really liked that part. Phooey the doctor broke the mood. I wish you continued this, or wrote a sequel. It is so good and I'd like to know what you'd have happen next. Wonderful job done! |