Oh, it's fixed. Nice.

Oh, fuck, this formatting is ROUGH.

Funny story, that letter hinting about Time and Turning it literally had my eyes leaking.

Surprised he didn't chuck him through the veil of death. That little Mcguffin gets far too little use.

Time to sort out the Hufflepuff unions?

just to be clear that would be trans sex not transgender. transgender doesn't affect your physical body.

I wish this had gone further. I wanted to see how you would resolve it fully at the end. Very enjoyable to this point.

You crazy! Hurrah!

I know that your Author's Note says that it isn't completed yet but I somehow felt at peace with this ending even though I was hoping that Harry would do Grey/Neutral and help Voldemort kill Dumbledore, I was actually laughing my arse of at these adorable idiots.

I mean I get why Harry was angry over his parent's deaths but it was war and I totally agree that Cedric shouldn't have died but I felt as if Harry was already over their deaths, idk why.

Also, do they both realise that the prophecy could be interpreted in many ways- One of my fav is that he has the POWER to vanquish the dark lord (not he has to vanquish the dark lord), the power he knows not was most probably the horcrux and "neither can live while the other survives" I mean spirit form is not really living and neither is living with the Dursleys who neglected and most probably abused him.

These are just my fav theories and I apologise for getting off track but what I actually wanted to say was that I loved this story and the plot was really interesting!

is this dead? please say its not dead.

Twisted but workable. I never would have come up with a solution like this!

Delightful, clever, and well-written: I've enjoyed this immensely so far.

I love this story's absolutely hilarious. Keep up the great work and I look forward to the next chapter.

This is just really interesting and I can't wait for more. Please continue

I hope one day you finish this story.