Reviews for Of War and Bubbles: Intervention
randomteenager chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
So many cute things about the story. Great lines such as:

"'Attack!'"

and

"'They are plotting'" (which made me laugh out loud hahaha!)

and of course,

"Cloud turned back to the two people he had once considered friends."

Very cute! Nicely done. Adding Zack was so adorable! Love it. :)
Silent Goth Girl chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
That was really funny. The duckies are surly plotting alright their giving cloud the evil eye. Silly zack
Anime Onnanoko chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
Lol, good story
Do a Barrel Roll chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
PLOT, DUCKIES, PLOT!
Ocean Starfly chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
Attack, duckies! xD lol Zack is awesome. Cute story; Cloud really does need to relax. I wanna take a bubble bath, but I can never seem to get it to work. Why is it so hard?
mom calling chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
Mako rain wrote a similar story around the same time you did this, so I'm guessing it was a challenge thing. Same set up, same props, but your story is your own and you did funny things with it. This must be a huge tub for 3 grown-ups...and I always get nervous at the candles that are inevitably there...but this is fan fiction, and I'm here to let go of my hang-ups, so thanks for allowing me to do so! From your future... mc
BritishSarcasm chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
"come my pretties" - best line. period.

i'm still laughing, i can just imagine when everyone has their eyes shut, relaxed and what not, then he just says that.
arisaxlavi911 chapter 1 . 5/25/2008
Nice, I love the ducks. It is fun to imagine this happening. Great Job on the story !
Shirosenshi Kisetsu 116 chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
Omg Zack and rubber duckies! lol I almost died!
All Kinds of Awsome chapter 1 . 4/16/2008
That was complete and utter crack.

I can't stop laughing. xD

Commander Zack of the Rubber Ducky Unit. *Gigglesnort*

I can see him doing this though...

*Sits with the other fangirls who wish Zack had lived*
Heartbroken Confession chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
lmao! that was hilarious! xD! Yeah, I wish Zack was alive too. and surrounded by ducks now, thanks to your fic. hehe ]
XxXRibbinzXnXChainzXxX chapter 1 . 3/4/2008
HILARIOUS! Now...what would happen ifd the ducks did attack? Dun dun dun! Mwhahahaah!
This User is Inactive chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
LOL. XD I didn't really expect anything too humorous, but then I read "Come my pretties," and fell over in tears. Honest to God, I wasn't expecting it. I mean, really. I was all, "Omfg!" and -xD's all over Bed-. I didn't really care for Zack before, but you have me hooked now.

Omg. xD The ending itself is just... xD. I cannot seem to find a word that will suffice for this situation, so I shall leave you with one final thought.

...xD.

S/W
Shadow-Kira-Kage chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
'they are plotting.' what exactly? what type of shampoo to load into their bazooka? XD never mind. Good work! keep it up!
flawinthemechanics chapter 1 . 10/31/2007
HA HAHAHAHAAHAHHAHAH HAH AHAHAH HAH HAH HAH AH AH HAHAH! OMFG! ROFLMFAO! I DID LAUGHING RIGHT THERE! HELL, I'm STILL LAUGHING! FUNNEH ONESHOT! Loved it, especally the end! HAHA
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