Reviews for Four Man Teams
xXxMusicNCookiesxXx chapter 2 . 7/25/2012
This was cute, but really short, hope u make it longer! update soon!
Blacksword Zero chapter 2 . 2/10/2008
I like your story,please update.
wubbzy chapter 3 . 1/12/2008
I really hope you do update more often cause this is getting really good! I liked it alot!
SK9 chapter 3 . 1/9/2008
nice story.. also, I like how you don't make Kyuubi evil.
Cloud Ex-SOLDIER chapter 3 . 1/9/2008
This story sounds interesting.

After a person finishes a dialogue, you have to start a new paragraph because with the way you have your dialogue arranged, it's confusing as to who is talking and it takes away alot of your story's momentum.

EXAMPLE. Naruto askes, "Hey Sakura, wanna hang out?"

Sakura replies, "Sure, that'll be great!"

See what i mean.

Anyways, i look forward to you updating this story more.
Mr. Nine chapter 2 . 1/8/2008
That was agreat chapter!
hotshot1492 chapter 2 . 2/3/2007
I really like this fanfic! I hope you can update a sooner this time!
Necro Girl chapter 1 . 12/4/2006
interesting, i lkke it though, but i sugest u use paragraphs(its easier to read) but im not trying to be rude or anything!
DarksMasterRen chapter 1 . 9/22/2006
This story is good but can you put a space

like this when ever some one is talking so i can under stand whos talking
Nikerdoodle chapter 1 . 7/16/2006
hmm hi hope that sasuke and hina-chan will be together._ update soon!
littleonegi chapter 1 . 7/16/2006
Please make Sasuke/Hinata together.
FirexDemon chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
Nie Story PLease Update soon!
the DragonBard chapter 1 . 7/10/2006
I'm sorry, but this thing is formatted very poorly. It comes out as one large block of text.

It seems interesting from what little I can tell.

If the next chapter is formatted properly, I hope to see it soon.
full-metal-sousuke chapter 1 . 7/10/2006
that was a good i think you should rewrite this chapter and make it lessed clumped up together. not a lot of people like the block writing.

pairings should be

naruto nad sakura

you can have sasuke be with hinata or some other girl...or have no one (give him hinata that would be the 2nd time i have read a fic with sasuke and hinata.)
dbzgtfan2004 chapter 1 . 7/10/2006
This is a cute story. Please continue. Naruto and Sakura forever.
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