Reviews for The Weasley's New Boy
Guest chapter 18 . 1/9
I love it keep writing
tricorvus chapter 18 . 10/15/2013
The authoress' work is appreciated and she's had a 5 year vacation. Hint, hint.
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tricorvus chapter 17 . 10/15/2013
There are just too many "clothing fitting and pins" jokes. And sadly most of them are not innocent-friendly... :(
I wish there WAS "potion making for dummies" It'd be a damn good read, I bet...
Great chapter
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tricorvus chapter 16 . 10/15/2013
polka dot has an L. No clue why they call them polka dots. :D :P
Nothing wrong with a little MP homage :D
I see you left off writing this one way back in '08, please find time to take it back up and finish it. This story is good.
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tricorvus chapter 15 . 10/15/2013
I really liked the speed with which this chapter moved. Not a lot of dilly-dallying
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tricorvus chapter 14 . 10/15/2013
good, good, good; get Remus on the case, now we've got that rat on the run :D
Wait, are there two folks writing this?
Great chapter
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tricorvus chapter 13 . 10/15/2013
Great point about Scabbers that JK herself missed. Over 3 books and 4 books afterward. And good on starting to call out Pettigrew's hiding...
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tricorvus chapter 12 . 10/15/2013
Boy- who-faints a lot ...
great story, great chapter
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tricorvus chapter 10 . 10/14/2013
You have a pattern of leaving missing words out of sentences. We kind of know what you mean, but it doesn't read well overall. You need to fix that. One example is "So Dumbledore's here to Mum and Dad that Harry ran away,"
Here to... what? alert, tell... but you left that out.
Constructive criticism helps you to be the best author you can be. You certainly want that.
Great chapter
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tricorvus chapter 9 . 10/14/2013
Great, now he has a snake-friend :D
It's good he's getting these experiences early on.
Clyde is the name I gave an owl figurine - our "mail owl". So naturally I laughed my ass off.
Great chapter
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tricorvus chapter 8 . 10/14/2013
Excellent. I'd like to hear more about the embarrassing accident, lol.
It's not really his first time on a broom, remember in book 7 we learned about his first kiddie broom, lol...
Great one
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tricorvus chapter 7 . 10/14/2013
Woohoo! Texan! I'm an Okie myself...
Inconsiderate is the correct spelling. Perfectly BAKED.
Thank you for starting Percy off as a stick-up-the-butt prat. We need to establish that early and often. He also wants some serious humbling, if you ask me. :D
great chapter,
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tricorvus chapter 6 . 10/14/2013
Good chappy
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tricorvus chapter 5 . 10/14/2013
damn good talk with Remus
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tricorvus chapter 4 . 10/14/2013
Great prank, I like that. Because it may be the only time in his life that he hears it that way round, anyway...
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