Omg this fic was so good! Seriously loved it!

Is anything different going to happen here? I mean, this is chapter 21 and it’s still following the plot of the first POTC movie almost verbatim. This is totally unoriginal and a waste of time. I could have just watched the movie and that would have been better. Also, your spelling and grammar are atrocious beyond belief. A talented writer would never create such a bland, unoriginal, plodding waste of time. You just took the plot of POTC, added Harry Potter characters to it, but didn’t really change the plot at all, other than changing the romantic involvements. This is exactly the kind of crappy fan fiction that I see too often: no originality, no humor, no logic, and every chapter looks like it was written by a 1st grader. I have literally seen little kids write better stories. Find a new hobby because you SUCK. Stop writing stories now because you’re a 2-bit hack.

Good story though I’m disappointed there is no sequel.

“”"No. A distraction." He corrected her. Pretty beautiful for a distraction“” well this story is disgusting — pedophillia ain’t cute. jack shouldn’t b perving after a 16yr old she’s a kid

It was a fun read By the way at the wedding of Jack and Hermione it's "lawfully wedded " not "loftly wedded" but all and all a fun read

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

dropping this due to highly cookie cutter, all you did was add characters and followed the story the same as normal with only relationships being different ...not to mention they feel forced and rushed as hell... another point that was pissing me off was the distinct lack of spellcasting...

Well despite the numerous spelling and grammar mistakes, it is a good idea. A fun plot and a fun easy read. :-)

Awesome story!

This is a great chapter! I love this whole idea! Xoxo

When are you going 2 write the sequel ? Did you forget or are you not going 2 make one now ? Please let us know if you are not going 2 make it anymore ... Like the story hope you do ... But maybe read the story over again so you could find the mistakes and fix them ... Like how herry gets told Hermione's in jail by Elisabeth then later on gets surprised that they bussed her out of jail like he was not told by Elisabeth ... But still good story ...

When would a sequel be coming out?

Is it our dearly beloved Ron that was talking to ole Davy?

Ron! That douche-dick bastard. I dont like him at all in the first place but he better not mess it up being that you were nice enough to save his sorry ass...sorry i dont like him...

Keep it coming!

OH GOD! Whenever I read the statement "I'll never tell" I think of How Avengers Should Have Ended