|Reviews for The Hunt Is On|
| Yeyinde chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
Diddo with Queen of the Red Skittle. I hope you get bored again.
| Queen of the Red Skittle chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
its amazing what people can do when they are bored ... very well done. I like the way you wrote this fic ... it was, like ... *pauses, searching for words* ... it was like you were looking at the unfolding action like a God, high and far away from the battle, overlooking it impassively. You didnt use a lot of inner emotions or turmoils, but you just told. Thats okay - a style, I would suppose - but if you REALLY wanted to get serious in writing or improve I would suggest going in deeper than just the facts.
Other than that, liked the action and cheered for your Predator at the end. Ah, a legend. Hope you get bored again so you write more!