"He goes first" XD

This was a great story. I think it conveyed well the feelings between not only the team but also others on Atlantis. I thought you ended it perfectly, with a touch of humor. I've always thought that was a nice kind of ending for these kind of stories. Great job!

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I loved how crisis piled on crisis in this fic, with the humour still continuing throughout and the little touches - like John wiping his mouth after cpr!

Oh, and the last line! ;-)

Great story! Love Shep/McKay stuff.

Loved this!

Fantastic! Loved it :D

Awesome story! I loved the ending!

I really enjoyed reading this story. The last line was very funny!

hehehehehe loved it! specially the end. WIsh it was longer!

thanks

I just love RodneyJohn friendship fics. There is something about them that just makes a person want to cry, especially when theres a lot of HC involved.

Wonderful story, please don't hesitate to write more.

Oh...goosebumps. I love this story! "the dots joined ranks" - brillant!

What a great little story. Best use of whump and angst in a compact space.

Thanks for sharing.

Beautiful. Loved the joint whumpage, absolutely adored the ending.

Great whumping of both guys, but also of those left to wait and pray. A different kind of whump for them, perhaps, but no less painful for those doing it.

I'm glad they both woke up and managed some banter. That's when you know they'll be fine- when they start sniping at each other.