Reviews for Fresh Prince: For once I didn't do it
Messy chapter 5 . 8/10/2017
Funny story send me the uncut
Super Princess Daisy chapter 5 . 3/5/2016
Great story and I would like to read the uncut chapters.
charles chapter 5 . 10/2/2015
Good stories need more ashley sex
Guest chapter 4 . 10/14/2014
Very good
Lizzyjay90 chapter 5 . 7/27/2014
Please send me the uncut. Thank you!
Guest chapter 5 . 3/13/2013
Please send me the uncut clips thanks
Guest chapter 5 . 3/13/2013
Plplease send uncut to mepleqs
ciarao645 chapter 5 . 9/18/2011
Love the story you have to write more :)

could u emiel me the uncut part please xxxxx
staca chapter 4 . 2/18/2010
could you please send me the uncut version

great story didnt sound very funny but picturing will in my head made me laugh
Binakka chapter 5 . 1/28/2010
Hey are you still sending out the uncut chapter?

Curious as to what happened...

alex brown chapter 5 . 2/12/2009
really good email is
x filelover 777 chapter 5 . 1/16/2009
hey man the story was pretty good u should write more.

can u send me the uncut chapter
Ashley chapter 5 . 12/28/2008
Good Story.
Yin and Yang chapter 3 . 7/17/2008
Yin: Well... that was... interesting...!

Yang: Idiot. It's spelled: Idiot.

Yin: Oh yah! and you mispelled midget You might wanna check your chapters more before posting them. Hehe!

Yang: Very OOC. The characters didn't act like themselves at all... and it's called FanFiction so that you can write about characters as they are. If you want other characters then make them ):

And you spelled Hawaii wrong.

Yin: And to all you other reviewers...You have a very unique taste in stories LoL. I mean, did any of you actually notice the spelling/grammar/character flaws...? I know that people don't really like giving criticism because they don't wanna be rude...

Yang: BUT, often times it's more helpful to give some constructive criticism than compliments, though those are nice too.

Yin: OOh! I have a compliment! This story is really hilarious. And you actually got Carlton's character right a few times. If you get an editor, they could help make this story posalutely absitively fantabulous! HeHe, LoL!

Yang: Yeah. The story itself isn't really bad, it's just that the diction isn't really good. There's not enough supporting detail and the punctuation could probably use some work-

Yin: -Nod-Nod-

Yang: So pretty much, you could make it a good story with spell check. And other such things. Good luck in writing! (:

Yin: Remember. SpellCheck! Mucho importante~

Blessed be,

-Yin and Yang
Knighten chapter 2 . 7/16/2008
Hey I would like the uncut chapter please.
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