Crikey-you know you're a genius writer? Never before have I read fanfiction and been so amazingly and utterly transported; this reads better than any screenplay or comic book! I’ve read a lot of good fanfiction, but this story, your work-I dunno what it is; but it’s in a class all its own. Your writing is profoundly insightful. Your words feel as if they’re literally leaping from the screen at me-I cannot adequately describe how lovely this story is in its depth and realism. All I can say is I am ~very~ much looking forward to more. Cheers!

Thanks so much for replying to my PM the other day, and thanks even more for another great update! And I'm curious: do you have any idea of how many chapters the story will be?

I can't wait to go back and read the whole thing (if it's done by then) over Christmas break. I'll do that along with watching my Superman Ultimate Collection:)

And I'm with the other reviewers in saying I hope the next update comes quickly (what a cliffhanger!) but completely respect that these chapters take a long time. Let's just hope this month is more conducive for fic-writing for you:)

I love this fic. Really love it. I admit I do sometimes get confused by the wandering timeline and wonderfully poetic language but hey i just read it again! LOL.

Your Lois is so insightful though, sees so much of Clark's character surely, even if she doesn't want to, she must know who he is?

Getting this story alert had me in anticipation all day to get home to read it, and I was not disappointed. Well worth the wait, though I wish hadn't been quite so long :)

I really love how you've developed the relationship between Lois and Clark. Clark shows her his 'Smallville Clark' persona, not the 'Metropolis Clark' everyone else sees. Smallville Clark is the real man, and in this fic, she's falling in love with the man, not the icon. I really like that, especially since every other fic (including mine) has her accept and fall in love with Clark, _AFTER_ falling in love with Superman and discovering that he is also Clark.

The depth and emotion of the chapter is impressive too. It interesting, engaging, thrilling and can't-put-it-down good. I had been anxiously waiting for this chapter since you posted the last one, and I'll be anxiously waiting for you to post the next one.

Well done, keep it up, post again soon.

-B

Oh. My. Goodness.

I'm speechless after having read this update. I've been hooked on this fic ever since I found it, but now...dear God, you're a mad genius. This is infinitely more profound, captivating, and frightening a tale than any I could ever read in the comic books, and it's by far one of the most unique, outstanding fics here. I'm falling off the edge of my seat in anticipation of the next chapter. Please don't keep us waiting so long!

Outstanding. I like the use of of character-building near the start, with minor details thrown in which become important later rather than dropping huge chunks of plot in without a good foundation. This is very well-constructed.

I'd hate to have to wait too long for the next chapter, but if taking your time produces this quality, then for heaven's sake, don't rush!

First off, I was extremely pleased that this chapter was long. Thanks. :) Secondly, and more importantly, it was outstanding - yet again. Your talent in creating a visualization for the reader is quite remarkable. The thoughts that are generated from the characters are human, and as a result,are deeply real and heartfelt. It certainly ended in a cliffhanger, so I do hope it's not too long before you update again. :) Please continue to write, this is an amazing piece of work.

I should have waited until you completed this to read, but I couldn't help it. Very very interesting so far.

Amazing! This fic is so original, I don't know how you come up with it. Please update soon!

well, that was worth the wait! I love the way you write, your prose style is fantastic, and the characterisation on everyone is brilliant. I'm trying not to gush or swear (I'm irish, and swearing denotes affection and admiration in my culture)but whoa! And i realy want to know what happens next...I won't be able to sleep now, lol!

Wow, very well done. Your characters sing. I won't say write more or publish more often. Instead let me say this is worth the wait, take as much time as you need.

Patrick

I am so happy to see an update to this story! And what a nice meaty update, too. Great chapter, I am truly in love with it. So many things you have to think twice about. I hope you update again soon.

By the way, does moll mole?

*gasp*

I didn't expect it to end as it did! I'm so confused and fascinated at the same time. The way the narrative wandered around in time but still kept the reader cognizant of the present crisis... damn.

The whole idea of confession was also a brilliant touch. And you're not done yet, either! Wow, I'm in awe right now...

The best fanfic ever. Period. I'm certain that I'm not alone waiting in anticipation of what could happen next. I have NO suggestions; I'm not worthy.

This fic is incredible. Seriously, the grim and gritty approach to everything...It's great. It reminds me of the novel, "It's Superman" in terms of your rich language and the reality of what's going on. I especially like the tragic portrayal of a fading Jonathan Kent...Martha has a fantastic keen edge. On top of everything else, your attention to technical detail is dizzying. Thanks for this and keep up the good work!