You know, this is really a surprisingly good story. Keep going, if you can. I'd like to hear your version of how/whether Lois finds out. Thanks!

Wow. What more can one say about this story that would do it justice. Keep up the good work.

Oh yeah, did I say 'Wow' yet?

My gosh, what a story! This is quite possibly one of the best Lois/Clark stories I’ve ever read, and it’s not even finished yet! You have everyone entirely in character. And what marvelous insight! You have such a subtle way of making the reader think, and the pace is extraordinary-truly, this is fantastic, and I am so glad I happened to stumble across it! I can’t wait for an update! This is definitely going on my Alerts. Cheers!

This is a wonderful story. I am so looking forward to updates. I'm impressed with the quality of the writing, and the pace at which this story is unfolding. Please continue soon! I love the quiet dignity everyone has in this.

Thanks for sharing!

Wow.

I sat after finishing your latest chapter and just pondered - pondered on everything you had brought across, all the ideas about Lois, her perception of Clark, who he really is, the depth and intelligence hidden by such a careful facade. I was stunned.

You led the reader down the same path of realistion as Lois and like her, I was flabbergasted with what we discovered, and how easily Clark has been hiding.

Your descriptions and tone - hell, everything, was amazing. This is an amazing insight into their relationship. Thank you so much.

First of all, I just wanted to say that this is the first story I've read that has prompted me to so willingly review. I love what you are writing. I love the fact that it is set way before SR; I love the fact that your chapters are very long and utterly satisfying; but most of all, I love the way you portray Clark. He may be a bit clumbsy, but he's an excellent reporter. That is wonderful (especially when he is so often written off as a hopeless dork with no talent who gets his stories only because he tags along with Lois). Your characters are complex, your plot is strong, and this fic is just great all around. Please keep up the good work because I am eagerly awaiting the next installment to this story. Thank you!

You had me at the figurative hello or the first chapter.

You made me want more with the second.

And with the third, with your FABULOUS, dead-on, absolutely BRILLIANT characterization of Clark "Classic Still Waters Run Deep Like Ocean Trenches" Kent, you had me HOOKED.

More! (applauds)

delightful. Very well done thus far, looking forward to more.

Okay, wow. Such an insightful look into Clark! I can really see the scales falling from her eyes here... she's so close to the truth.

Can't wait for the next one!

Bravo! Will there be more chapters? Your writing is utterly charming and disarming at the same time. I would have to say this is the best pre Superman Returns story that I've come across.

Wow. That had depth that was just... wow.

Pardon me while I gush:

My gosh you are a fantastic writer! I absolutely love the details you put in and your characterizations are so beautiful! I'm really in awe of your talent. I greatly anticipate ore of this.

Wow. I REALLY like the premise. You actually a plot, and that's a rarity these days in this fandom. Excellent job. :)

I really love how you are able to drag such lovely emotions out of Lois. Seeing how protective she is toward Clark is a very welcome change from how most people write her.

This story is amazing. You've done such a wonderful job of conveying the characters and their thoughts and emotions. Keep up the great work.