Reviews for Phoenix Tears Rising |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this is just confusing for me |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$ |
![]() ![]() ![]() A nice story although you should have run spell check or had someone beta it for you. I also don't like your killing of Neville. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god, I almost lost it when reading the horse incident. My sister and I both went through this at various times with horses of various sizes. The absolute worst was our little Shetland pony. She loved to eat grass, wait u TIL you kicked her, then take off at a full gallop with the bit between her teeth and bounce you until you went flying off. The worst was the one that waited until he had my sister on the street, then tossed her. Thanks for the laugh |
![]() ![]() ![]() great , loved every moment of it _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an amazing story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story 2018 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this story. It gives Harry a new family to be dotted on and give the past founders and family a new son to be proud of. With his gift it save both past and present. With power comes with great responsibilities and be cautious while using said power. It's great to see the growth of Harry with his new found family and see the love and understand the disciplinary of his actions that was needed by those of the parental figure and family members. He was not disciplined correctly by the people surrounds him in the future especially the adults in his life. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am highly confused. Why does a year pass between the events at the DoM and Snape checking up on her? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story. Thanks. Blueberry Babe |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$ |
![]() ![]() I truly like how you did the time travel. You have great ideas and flow to your work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it, especially the epilogue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The is an amazing story! Is sad that is not as well know as others. I think your fic summary has something to do with that. I almost skipped it never or seemed that it wouldn't be who written. How about something life this: An ancient potion and one foolish decision, will change Harry's entire future. Harry is unexpectedly brought to the past and finds the true meaning of family... Founders TimeTravel |