Reviews for Phoenix Tears Rising
Guest chapter 3 . 1/3
I am so confused.
Word of advice, allow readers to understand the basics of the story before you make shit go to hell. Or start jumping around everywhere.
FirePhoenix86 chapter 32 . 9/19/2014
I liked this story. I had a hard time with Harry having two fathers and no mother figure, but it was bearable enough to complete the story. I just kind of wish you could have had a woman in there somewhere. Or had Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff be the mother figures he needed.

I also didn't really like that you changed Harry's name. I've read stories like this where Harry starts thinking of himself as the new identity and while it usually bothers me, I push through. I usually prefer Time Travel stories where he adopts a new persona but at least still thinks of himself as Harry.

I loved that he didn't get along with his brothers at first but eventually they became very close. I hate it when authors make everything "perfect" and easy with no challenges for the character. I also love that Harry was doted and adored by his strict fathers. They gave him stict rules and punishment if he disobeyed. You also stuck with the whole, Adults are Always Right, Children do Not backtalk their Elders, Medieval mindset. While some of the terms they used occasionally weren't very time-sensitive or accurate, it's understandable that it wouldn't be. It would take a lot more research than is necessary for fanfiction to make it all accurate.

I also love love love! that Harry was able to travel back to the future and that he got his happy ending!
Ezmerelda chapter 32 . 9/17/2014
I usually avoid stories that take place in the Founders' time, but decided to check out the first little bit...then read the whole thing in one day.

Suffice it to say that I enjoyed your story. Thanks for writing! "
Mohammad.Alzo chapter 12 . 7/17/2014
Why is harry acting like a little bitch? doesn't he have any balls?
LBII chapter 32 . 7/10/2014
Thank You
ann7e chapter 32 . 1/12/2014
bam bam baaam. and voldemort's dead and everything is fine :3 amazing story i really like it though i was a bit surprised when SALAZAR SLYTHERIN revealed himself in front of the slytherins and talked to them and blaise was like 'meh, that dude is only the founder of my house'. i expected them to be more... awestruck. but alright. neat story anyway. btw i love the slytherin names you decided on: saladin salazar and salis :D its great !
crotia chapter 32 . 1/1/2014
Thank you it was wonderful. And if you could I'd like a Christmas out take of some sort. You know a huge Christmas dinner with all the Weasleys, some friends and some of Harry's family. I'd love to see Salazar dining with Molly and Arthur. And I also would like for Harry to be a little to cheeky with Hermione witnessing. That would be so funny.
Hermione would probably begin a lecture about damaging braincells, high risk of injuries and child abuse.
crotia chapter 30 . 1/1/2014
Sweet Merlin, this is so frustrating. I like your story so much that every other sentence I get distracted by thinking how this could continue and how much fun it is. So I hardly get on with reading.
crotia chapter 27 . 1/1/2014
I only have one question. Why didn't Tristian take a good long nap. regain his powers and than go back to the moment the founders left to warn them?
crotia chapter 28 . 1/1/2014
Ah, that is so cute
crotia chapter 29 . 1/1/2014
This is it. The moment I have been waiting for for a whole moment. I can hardly wait. unfortunately I don't have a WIFI connection here so I can't read on yet. So I must wait till we arrive at our destination at my grandparents'. I can't wait for Mcgonnagalls face when she suddenly finds herself faced with Godric. A were just arriving. Counting the seconds.
YES
crotia chapter 26 . 1/1/2014
Cool! I hope he does go to his own time again and takes the founders with him to fight. That would be fun.
crotia chapter 24 . 12/31/2013
Wow, I actually forgot to breath.
crotia chapter 17 . 12/31/2013
Is it just me or does your story has a certain lacking of females.
crotia chapter 13 . 12/31/2013
That was fun. I wonder when he is gonna tell them about his live in his own time. The fame, war, dangers and prophecy
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