|Reviews for Phoenix Tears Rising|
| Guest chapter 32 . 1/5/2013
| Mari Wollsch chapter 32 . 12/31/2012
great story xx
| lilmisadiva chapter 15 . 12/15/2012
aww a family
| KMH1 chapter 32 . 10/28/2012
Thanks for sharing. Your time-travel story is quite different than any other I have read, and though there are a few grammatical errors, it read well, and you did a great job. :)
The "gifts" from each of the lines were done in such a way that it wasn't unbelievable not "super-powerful without reason" Harry.
Thanks, and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. :)
| G Fawkes chapter 13 . 9/18/2012
qui·et·en /ˈkwaɪɪtn/ Show Spelled [kwahy-i-tn] Show IPA Chiefly British
verb (used without object)
1. to become quiet (often followed by down ).
Okay then... I learned something today. I had NO idea THAT was even a word. (it's not in the U.S. vocab) Chalk one up for looking it up BEFORE making a fool of one's self.
| G Fawkes chapter 9 . 9/17/2012
I realize this was written six years ago, so any question I have is completely rhetorical... but how are they NOT having a conversation as to WHO Harry is, HOW he got there, WHERE he came from, at least , if not WHEN also, instead of just jumping straight into "this is your new name, and this IS what you will do, because we are all great and powerfull gasbags, and nothing you think matters!"
Call me a would-be ingrate, but I'd be like " look you great sodding arses, You summoned me back one thousand years and ripped me away from what life I thought I had... that is BEFORE finding out my parents were'nt my real parents, My mom called me a parasite, My dad hated me, and the 'greatest wizard alive' wants to use me for some unholy, perverted scheme of his to kill a monster! Well: A) go fuck yourselves, until you ask me what I want, and B) Go fuck each other until you realize I didn't ASK to come here and throw myself at your feet!"
(Ok, rant over... yeah, I got issues)
BTW... I like the fic.
| G Fawkes chapter 7 . 9/17/2012
To anyone else, I would be considered contrary and maybe even rude, but since your bio says you're studying to be a teacher, a higher standard is required... 'Owlary'? And this I couldn't even figure out to ask...
'Sighing heavily Harry composed a quick note pleading someone to rescue in from the demented Hogwarts.' ... What?
The story 'line' is great so far, but I seriously hope some more care will be given between now and the day you are marking children's papers with red pen.
| Maeve Selene chapter 2 . 8/31/2012
This is a good chapter!
But you wrote "Bet anything he was jealous of the man who knocked your mum up before their wedding." and then as evidence that the child wasn't James' you put "You're mum was married to your dad on December 31st 1979 and you were born on July 31st 1980…" but you don't have to be married to have a child so even if they weren't married when Harry was conceived, Harry could still be James' child.
Right, I'm really sorry about that little rant but my Aunt wasn't married to my uncle when she became pregnant but that doesn't mean my uncle isn't my cousins father so what you put isn't really correct.
I do love this story though! And this is the third time I'm reading it but I haven't read it for a while so I didn't notice it before! But I still think this story is brilliant!
| ksecc1 chapter 10 . 8/22/2012
This is really funny!
| StormyFireDragon chapter 32 . 7/29/2012
This story was a delightful read and i enjoyed every moment of it.
| StormyFireDragon chapter 10 . 7/28/2012
nice so he makes friends with a bicorn and a snake. interesting story so far
| StormyFireDragon chapter 4 . 7/28/2012
nice one with the baby poop
| Mcmllnchrstn91 chapter 32 . 6/5/2012
| Sharon T chapter 32 . 5/27/2012
Wow , this was a great story. It was much better than I expected:) thanks for writing.
| sneaky lunitic spy chapter 32 . 5/3/2012
I love it keep up the epic work)