Reviews for Unforgivable
CWolf2 chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
There are some very powerful emotions portrayed here. What an excellent one shot. The characterizations were excellent as was the setting and plot. I really enjoyed this, good work!
DoctoressOctopus chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
YAY, SenelxChloe. Screw what the game says, this pairing owns. XD Anyhow, I liked this. Angsty yet sweet, very descriptive and well written. I recently got to this part in the game, and I'm glad someone took it and gave it a more romantic twist. Cheers for you and thanks for the read!
LaniZion chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
Awesome chapter detailing the silent relationship between Chloe and Senel. I had always hoped that in that moment, the two would actually admit to one another how they felt, but no, she goes and stabs the bonehead.

*shrugs*

It was very well written, so there's no complaints on this side.