Reviews for Unforgivable
CWolf2 chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
There are some very powerful emotions portrayed here. What an excellent one shot. The characterizations were excellent as was the setting and plot. I really enjoyed this, good work!
perpetually-prototyping chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
YAY, SenelxChloe. Screw what the game says, this pairing owns. XD Anyhow, I liked this. Angsty yet sweet, very descriptive and well written. I recently got to this part in the game, and I'm glad someone took it and gave it a more romantic twist. Cheers for you and thanks for the read!
LaniZion chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
Awesome chapter detailing the silent relationship between Chloe and Senel. I had always hoped that in that moment, the two would actually admit to one another how they felt, but no, she goes and stabs the bonehead.


It was very well written, so there's no complaints on this side.